terri_burgin

the story itself isn't bad but the misspellings and typos and pronoun problems are driving me crazy and really taking me out of the story. please edit

I agree I only wish beringer wife could get popularity points I love her character

the story and characters are so good can't wait for the next chapter

I laughed so hard I cried

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

this was such a fun book to read. The main characters are funny and vivid. I couldn't stop reading and the action in the story is good wrapped up a little to quickly but still a good read.

this is such a cute story and I the character development of the lead characters. the story has some of the funniest dialogue I have read in a while.

I truly am enjoying this story can't wait for the next chapter. The vivid characters and love the female lead she's no pushover. Love the direction the story is going in.

interesting story idea can't wait to see where this goes

I am really enjoying this story so far. some minor spelling errors but over I like the main character but would love a deeper development of the Male and female lead but still worth a read