Haylizzle
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Haylizzle2yrReplied to ASHARARight... Every first years are waiting for the doors to open to the great hall and Mr Raven hair boy stomp's up like hey MR... trying to start something and nobody will pay attention to it?
" Try doing that shit again and you'll be dead before you even find out what happened," I said and then walked forward not bothering with the kid anymore.- Haylizzle2yrCommented
Why does he call him a kid tho? They're the same age it's a bit weird and everyone overhearing may get a tiny bit suspicious of what he may be hiding
" Try doing that shit again and you'll be dead before you even find out what happened," I said and then walked forward not bothering with the kid anymore. - Haylizzle2yrReplied to confused4youHe then leaned in and kissed me and couldn't stop him, maybe I didn't want him to, as his lips touched mine, I was lost, I kissed him back and it felt somewhat revealing like something was untwisting in my heart it felt freeing, my heart was pounding like an engine, I couldn't breathe, the world was spinning and it felt wrong yet why was it soo beautiful and then he looked at me and I realised, what it was and he said "Wait you are..." and before he could say anything else I knocked him out.
- Haylizzle2yrReplied to confused4you
It's how you change from 3rd person to first person writing in the same dialogues that's a bit out there.
He then leaned in and kissed me and couldn't stop him, maybe I didn't want him to, as his lips touched mine, I was lost, I kissed him back and it felt somewhat revealing like something was untwisting in my heart it felt freeing, my heart was pounding like an engine, I couldn't breathe, the world was spinning and it felt wrong yet why was it soo beautiful and then he looked at me and I realised, what it was and he said "Wait you are..." and before he could say anything else I knocked him out. - Haylizzle2yrCommented
So Hope is as powerful as an archangel now? this story gets more and more ridiculous. not to mention the constant abrupt POV changes.
He then leaned in and kissed me and couldn't stop him, maybe I didn't want him to, as his lips touched mine, I was lost, I kissed him back and it felt somewhat revealing like something was untwisting in my heart it felt freeing, my heart was pounding like an engine, I couldn't breathe, the world was spinning and it felt wrong yet why was it soo beautiful and then he looked at me and I realised, what it was and he said "Wait you are..." and before he could say anything else I knocked him out. - Haylizzle2yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- Haylizzle2yrCommentedPerceiving McGonagall's gaze, Mike took out his wand and pointed it at Ron's nose to "clean it up." The stain on Ron's nose disappeared instantly.
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House's not colleges 🤦🏻♀️
"The four colleges are: Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin. Each has bred countless outstanding wizards, and they have all made great contributions to the wizarding world. In addition, The school holds the College Cup every year, and I hope you can all perform well and strive to win honor for your college." - Haylizzle2yrCommentedThis book has been deleted.
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- Haylizzle2yrCommented"Chitauri!"
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Just (as) Tony*
Just Tony said these words. - Haylizzle2yrCommented
Boy*... He's not a man yet, tho.
This chapter has been deleted. - Haylizzle2yrCommentedMatthew closed his eyes and imagined a future where he was free of all control, he lived happily with his family, friends, and even wives. He had a few Children. Nobody could harm them, because he stood at the peak. He was truly free and unbound. A strong imagined memory where all his goals were fulfilled, just thinking about it made his whole body feel happiness.
- Haylizzle2yrCommented"The Caster needs to concentrate on a single very happy Memory, no matter if the Memory is real or not. Only the feeling of happiness matters." He read out loud, "Fuuuck! I could just imagine a memory. Sometimes I am just plainly blind." complained Matthew.
- Haylizzle2yrCommentedWell, Raczidian got envious and enraged, since the girl liked the boy and his Patronus repelled his army of dementors. In his anger, he cast the Patronus charm himself to repel the mouse Patronus, but he forgot that only people pure of heart could cast the Charm. Instead of a Patronus, Maggots shot out of his Wand and quickly devoured him as they engulfed his body.
- Haylizzle2yrCommented"Oh shit, I am sorry Cho. I completely forgot that. I've had to take care of something else and forgot to tell you. I will make it up to you, let me teach you some useful spells on Friday, ok?" asked Matthew with a smile.