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Ray_Vorhard_2199

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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_219928d
    Replied to DaoistupzWLg

    Kinda. Actually it was some kind of pseudo enuncia, designed to be able used by Astartes and to some extent mortal safely.

    In an instant, Cortana was thrust into a realm of incomprehensible visions, her senses overwhelmed by the magnitude of what she witnessed. A fleet of unimaginable proportions dominated the galaxy, its power transcending mortal understanding as it shaped and reshaped the very fabric of reality with but a single word.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21991mth
    Replied to Artemis099

    I can relate to that. actually, AI writting on third person pov are not that problematic.

    In an instant, the atmosphere shifted, the once jubilant anticipation giving way to an undercurrent of apprehension as the sounds of impending arrival heralded change.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21991mth
    Replied to Artemis099

    I see. I can't blame you for that. I can save much of my time by using it. Actually I can write it with the same flowery language as this. But the structure is not proper enough to build up the tense. What can I say. English is my third language. But fun fact, I found the AI edit is... lacking for my taste. That is why, I choose to use AI to edit the structure and find appropriate flowerly language for the build up. The rest like the build up, characters' dialogue, the writting style are mine.

    In an instant, the atmosphere shifted, the once jubilant anticipation giving way to an undercurrent of apprehension as the sounds of impending arrival heralded change.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21991mth
    Replied to Artemis099

    The Big E knows that. But he want to burn away any innocents left. He knew the price to pay. Moreover, he possessed total control over the entire planet via Lothens's newly created program and the true color of the Primordial Annihilators would be still a secret for the rest of the Old Earth.

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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21991mth
    Replied to Artemis099

    Can you elaborate?

    In an instant, the atmosphere shifted, the once jubilant anticipation giving way to an undercurrent of apprehension as the sounds of impending arrival heralded change.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21991mth
    Replied to Artemis099

    some part of it, yes.

    Ch 48 Chapter 15: Ave Imperator pt 1
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
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    Replied to DaoistupzWLg

    Spoiler alert: If you count major armory worlds in the Webway and the real space, you would have in the billions or maybe tens of billions

    During the 29th millennium, the Imperium's vast industrial capacity ensured that every planet was guarded with at least one Titan legion. These legions, comprised of hundreds of Titans, stand as bulwarks against threats to humanity's domains.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21992mth
    Replied to DaoistupzWLg

    Imagine like this. Cohorts is 100.000 strong Auxilia. Battalions is 1.000 and company is 100.

    The Colonel holds a pivotal role within the Solar Guardian Auxilia, overseeing the entire cohort of Solar Guardians on their mission. Tasked with ensuring tactical victory, Colonels wield authority over the entire tanks battalion, Auxilia cohorts, and aircraft squadrons.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21992mth
    Replied to DaoistupzWLg

    Now you can read it. I have uploaded it.

    Ch 46 Chapter 13: The Grand Conspiracy pt 3
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21992mth
    Replied to DaoistupzWLg

    This Codex is pretty long. Around 6K worth of words. It almost done though

    Ch 46 Chapter 13: The Grand Conspiracy pt 3
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
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    Ok. I will make my comment here. But keep it mind, it was your work so I will appreciate it. But I will make some correction about the power scale. If you are referred to physical hivemind, Saiyans can defeat them. But the actual hivemind they can't. It can twist higher dimensional plane with ease and certainly stronger than even nameless warp creature in the Warp that can destroy and create universes with a thought alone. And, even you managed to destroy the physical body of the hivemind, the hivemind in the warp is still alive and if you want to kill it, you will need power infintely stronger than Zen-Oh because there are literally infinite amount of beings in the warp capable performing what Zen-O and super shen long did in the DB series. Ah, keep it in mind that Warp creatures in the material universe are just avatars of their true forms, infinitly small version. Why I repeated the concept of intinite several times. Because the creature of warp can manipulate their dimensionality at their woll. Becoming 3 dimensional being to 20 dimensional being are child's play for them. but again, it is your works. You can anything your want, but consider this as fyi.

    Ch 59 The Siege Of Faradras VI
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
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    Replied to Artemis099

    I don't say I read the entire 1000 books of Warhammer series. I'm in Warhammer for more than 6 years. I at least read dozens or more. And fortunately, I have several friends to give me the title for me to read in order to get me the whole picture.For example, there are beings that exist in beyond the Warp. And there is theory that pretty much makes sense due to many of its description and many people does not aware of, that is Warhammer series potentially, has a supreme being that held the entire creation(The Warp, Materium, Atheric Void, etc) in order.

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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21994mth
    Replied to DaoistupzWLg

    enough to at least got what I wanted and the full picture

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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
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    Replied to kingkong1

    You will see. You will see

    Ch 44 This is your time to vote.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
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    Replied to kingkong1

    I suggest you to read my story in detailed motion. I never want to reveal Logos and their power as soon as possible. But about This AU Adeptus Astartes and the Primarch. I have mentioned it several times in my story. Primarch in this AU is essentially leader of the Space Marine Legion. So no. This AU Primarch≠Logos. They are completely different on the fundamental level.

    Ch 44 This is your time to vote.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21995mth
    Replied to kingkong1

    This version of Astartes = Primarch in cannon.

    Ch 44 This is your time to vote.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21995mth
    Replied to kingkong1

    I used Logos in term of philosophy "A principle originating in classical Greek thought which refers to a universal divine reason, immanent in nature, yet transcending all oppositions and imperfections in the cosmos and humanity."

    Ch 44 This is your time to vote.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21995mth
    Replied to kingkong1

    The counterpart exist. You can see them in the Victoria Aurea.

    Ch 44 This is your time to vote.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21995mth
    Replied to kingkong1

    If you reffering the sword I have mentioned as the base of your scalling. Then I will tell you that particular sword capable of harming Slaanesh. Which a being that view the infinite multiverse of Warhammer universe as a plaything.

    Ch 44 This is your time to vote.
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  • Ray_Vorhard_2199
    Ray_Vorhard_21995mth
    Replied to loyal_man_of_iron

    Hmmm... I can't answer that outright. But consider this. This AU Imperium possess many psi tech from Aeldari. And im the lore, a group of Asuryani priests alone managed to forged sword from the literal concept of the death force of the entire universe.Think that as a consideration.

    Ch 44 This is your time to vote.
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