Ray_Vorhard_2199

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Not always. But I make the context that it was bigger than a continent, resembling a planet. So let the imagination do the job

the initial wasn't the formal one

Thanks for the correction

Kinda. Actually it was some kind of pseudo enuncia, designed to be able used by Astartes and to some extent mortal safely.

I can relate to that. actually, AI writting on third person pov are not that problematic.

I see. I can't blame you for that. I can save much of my time by using it. Actually I can write it with the same flowery language as this. But the structure is not proper enough to build up the tense. What can I say. English is my third language. But fun fact, I found the AI edit is... lacking for my taste. That is why, I choose to use AI to edit the structure and find appropriate flowerly language for the build up. The rest like the build up, characters' dialogue, the writting style are mine.

The Big E knows that. But he want to burn away any innocents left. He knew the price to pay. Moreover, he possessed total control over the entire planet via Lothens's newly created program and the true color of the Primordial Annihilators would be still a secret for the rest of the Old Earth.

Can you elaborate?