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Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki2hCommentedCh 2 Chapter 1 – 41 Supreme Beings in 1- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki3hCommentedNot that I was planning on using them.
- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki23hCommentedCh 5 Not A Chapter
- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki1dCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Pilot
- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki1dCommentedCh 1 Prologue - Dead Tyrant
- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki1dCommented
It's the GREAT BEAST
[Description: The great rabbit looks similar to an unsuspecting albino rabbit; however, with its speed, sharp horn, and razor-sharp teeth, it proves to be a deadly enemy. - Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki2dReplied to dixonkunts
this is an ungodly abomination and I will be taking it
😏 - Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki2dCommentedCh 5 For word count
- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki2dCommented
even though I voted for the other I'm glad it's staying in demon slayer
[A/N: I'm back and I don't have any excuses. Well for the poll result is in favour of finishing the story in demon slayer world so that will be it. And please read my Marvel fanfic.] - Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki2dCommentedCh 54 Ch. 51 - The Great Pretender, a monster Slayer!
- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki3dCommentedThis is what happens when you leave a Nord, who wants to learn to be a mage. They will always end up using their favorite spell: Warhammer to the face.
- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki4dCommented
like building up jenga, one block at a time so you can build it stable
Fuck it I have ideas but I suck at writing them can anyone give me some advice. I am open to any kind of suggestion. I can't describe the surrounding environment or the speeches, no matter how hard I try they always come out badly. Maybe I'll end up writing another one, I tried to start this one too early. - Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki4dCommented
every writer has a different style, so eventually you would adapt to your own style, but for now you can do minor environment descriptions through character speech, or you can open up a chapter with a brief description of the environment and go from there, do things one step at a time so you don't burn yourself out keeping track of everything
Fuck it I have ideas but I suck at writing them can anyone give me some advice. I am open to any kind of suggestion. I can't describe the surrounding environment or the speeches, no matter how hard I try they always come out badly. Maybe I'll end up writing another one, I tried to start this one too early. - Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki5dCommented
must have taken a while to figure all that out, I'm all for it and I have been loving your story so thank you for your work
Moving on to the last thing I keep getting comments on, Romance. There is romance in this story but that doesn't mean it's the focus of the story or really anything more than a side note. Contrary to what people keep saying Danmachi is not a romance story but an adventure story with a heavy romantic harem subplot. It's about Bell adventuring and growing stronger while in the process attracting women to him by just being himself. In other words get off my back about it as theres nothing wrong with Alex not chasing skirt or dating and focusing on his goal instead. As I said there IS romance however so shut up about it already. - Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki6dReplied to Cadenadeaventuras
probably some weird thing in the raw
"Well, don't worry about it. I'm not exactly a good person! Those who want to kill me would have to line up from here to Wano Country, then from there to Laugh Tale. What's a few criminal organizations?" Robin seemed a bit puzzled. Laugh Tale sounded familiar, but what was Wano Country? And who was Momonosuke? - Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki6dCommented
suggestion: make a small side story involving Jen Tennyson as the female lead, it doesn't have to be cannon for the fanfic, just something for shots and giggles
1) Yes! - Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki7dReplied to Yugi_Yugi'Down Girl, he's just a friend, he's just a friend, but fuck do I want to pounce on his...**** and fuck his—****..."
- Shiroi_Kuro_Yuki7dCommented
here, I like this, but please keep the harem small
-If the story continues to other world it will obviously be harem. Comment here for it.