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Daoist1WuR6Z1yrCommentedNever seen a brown asian.
Rags facial features contorted in rage as he recalled Tal's sniggering freckled face. "That skinny a*s Asian motherf*cker, I'm gonna punch his brown ass face when I get back." he muttered.- Daoist1WuR6Z1yrCommented
Snow white and the seven dwarves
Of the Beginning of Days it is told among the wise that the One True God (Eldin), sang the weave of our world. He brought forth the ocean and lands and invited them to his song. And so their choir formed the Great Music, birthing the 7 Elder Gods to being. - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrCommented
comment section is the most toxic thing I've ever seen
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For all those wanting to read ahead, this is a repeat/rebrand of a novel known as the Reaper Of The Martial World by the same author. Go read that if your tryna read ahead.
In addition, invoking the will of music was something simple for him. Dyon had been playing the piano ever since he was tall enough to climb onto the bench that stood in front of his mother's favorite Steinway. The only reason that he didn't produce phenomena like today in the mortal world was because it was devoid of the energy the martial world had. - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrCommented
She means Evelyn of course.
"It's technically our fault that they were notified of him," Astryn pointed out as she finished wearing her knee-length dress. "The same thing happened with Astryn." - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrCommented
Host being in favor and in opposite? Am I being dumb rn or is this a mistake?
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See how everyone in his family is not-harem? His parents, his uncle and aunt, his grandparents. Author, don't break that.
Ray and Zara had left the manor three years ago, three months after his mother had gotten pregnant. Although they stayed in contact, they didn't communicate much. - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrCommented
Yet*
'Easy for you to say and bruh, I wasn't planning on doing anything.' - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrReplied to Control_FREAK
I can never unsee that.
Plop! - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrReplied to cluiz
The lowercase i hurts me.
The Primordial Gods didn't take any more followers and never appeared in the room. They were the oldest of gods and rarely left their abodes. - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrPosted
I think the story is good. Only have two problems. The first and biggest one is the religion factor within this. It uses a real existing religion and has the main character suck up to that religion. Like it isn't as if the author is just incorporating elements of that religion as inspiration but actually have prayers/blessings/religious practices that are completely unnecessary for fiction. I, as a believer of a completely different religion, have a hard time reading moments where the MC will pray and not feel like I am doing something wrong by reading this. Please, if you are an inspiring author, do not include real religions within your books. The global community is diverse, and while drawing inspiration from your religion can be good, only include prayers and such if isn't a real religion. No offense to anyone who practices the religion within this book,
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Out of the blue confession real quick.
"Sam please don't go there, I know you've always liked me okay! But I can't return your feelings! You're like a family to me, you're my friend, my best friend and that's all! Don't make this complicated!" Kiara tried to stop Sam of whatever he was going to say next, although Sam didn't stop. - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrCommented
Ain't he the most popular tho?
"No no no! It's the opposite, I was never invited to hang out so I was just surprised that's all!" Anthony hurriedly started shaking his hands in the air as he tried to explain his point. - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrCommented
Surprisingly, I didn't cringe. This was actually funny. Is this...web novel humor?
"I got your back! My besto friendo!" - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrReplied to Daoist1WuR6Z
Don't take this as an insult author. Just a tip for improvement.
"What?! Who does he think hs is?!" - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrReplied to Anime_Gal_7110
Edgy. Cringed. Need to get an edgy police for all edgy teens on web novel.
(Look I know what you're saying but you have to endure it a little, you can't kill them right now.) - Daoist1WuR6Z1yrReplied to MysticalEevee
Liked that novel before author started including gay people. [img=recommend]
Everyone who was whispering earlier felt guilty for accusing an innocent boy of being a supervillain. Besides what's his age anyway? 18 at most, there's no way he could be a supervillain.