_Aoi
If you stalkers wanna know about me... first of all, I'm a male, as you can see from my profile. I live in my country. My age is how many days and years I have lived. That's pretty much it.
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_Aoi2yrReplied to Lord_TobiLolđ, how can cat videos restore our faith in humanity?
In the end, there was a heart emoji, and Will smiled seeing it. Her audition for the role of Maggie was today, and she has been working hard for it in the past few days.- _Aoi2yrCommented
Tf is a heart-shaped pussy? Does that mean she's so loose that her cunt became heart-shaped?
Millicas look at her vagina closely. Her pussy is red and beautiful heart shaped. She also has pubic hair the same as her hair. He saw she had some juice coming out. - _Aoi2yrCommented
Come on, guys, it's a fkn lizard; stop being horny.
Gender: [Female] - _Aoi2yrReplied to Ali_AC
Lmaođ, other Chinese fanfiction MCs don't even have a Japanese name like that. I'm surprised it isn't Uchiha Feng or Uchiha Chaoxieng or something, lol.
It has been five years since Uchiha Tatsumi transmigrated to Naruto World. - _Aoi2yrReplied to GloomyGod
It's pretty understandable. The author doesn't want to make the MC too OP. We all know giving the MC free NORMAL and CLEAN clothes are going overboard that would disrupt the flow of fate of the world he is in. Besides, wearing hospital gowns makes the MC look cooler and not like a mentally disabled person that escaped the mental hospital when the outbreak started, definitely not.
He went towards the desk by the bed and opened the drawers until he found the hospital gowns, then he wore one of them. He got into the bed and chose to go to sleep for the remainder of the time before Rick awakens. - _Aoi2yrReplied to ForManaga
I didn't really mention her since you wouldn't add her to the harem...right?
The second mission gives him a headache, He counts it but there are only 4 good women in both parts of a movie of course excluding Edna. - _Aoi2yrCommented
4 good women? Imo, the only pretty women there are Mirage, Helen, and Violet. Who's the 4th one? Please don't tell me it's Jack's babysitter.
The second mission gives him a headache, He counts it but there are only 4 good women in both parts of a movie of course excluding Edna. - _Aoi2yrReplied to ForManaga
Oh, lmao. Seems like I accidentally skipped the chapter.
"Wh-what do you want?" Kaguya's face blushed, She have an idea of what Max will ask for, After all, he did that to her. Yet she didn't mind as long as she get her old mother back it was well worth it and it will not seem bad to it with Max. - _Aoi2yrCommented
What did Max do to her? Was it mentioned and I just forgot or something?
"Wh-what do you want?" Kaguya's face blushed, She have an idea of what Max will ask for, After all, he did that to her. Yet she didn't mind as long as she get her old mother back it was well worth it and it will not seem bad to it with Max. - _Aoi2yrPosted
Like I said before, I'll give another review when the fix progresses, so here I am. Writing Quality - 5/5 Grammar's good like what I said in my 1st review. Also, the author writes the POV of other characters and not just the protagonist's which I liked. Story Development - 4/5 I won't go into detail, but I'm liking where it's going after I posted my first review. Character Design - 3/5 Nothing changed. Updating Stability - 3/5 2 chaps a week is alright, I guess. World Background - 3/5 I was expecting a pure DAL story with the MC just going around other universes to go sightseeing or something. What made me rate it lower than my 1st review was the author added FGO elements, which was for me, unnecessary. The MC's going to other worlds anyway, what's the point of adding FGO elements? Could have just made him go to Nasuverse or smth. Overall, the fic's good. Sadly, I'll be ending my journey here. Adding in unnecessary stuff like fgo elements didn't fit well with me. Don't get me wrong, the fate series is one of my favorites, but I expected a pure DAL fic. In the future, I won't even be surprised if you write some bs like 'Since servants in fate are basically spirits turned into familiars, couldn't the MC make spirits like Tohka or Kurumi his servants?' or something like that.
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So if he acts like a God, he'll become a God?
"That- But, That" Max acted like a naive guy and started hesitating after hearing her. Max admired this acting skill, even he knows that he was acting but he still believed himself as a naive kid. It is as if that this skills iron law, Once he started acting everyone should believe it as it is true, no matter you know it's acting or not. This acting skill is beyond any normal acting techniques. This skill not only defies perception but can even change the physic to go with acting like if Max acting as sick, This technique will change his body and simulate every symptom of that sickness even it can replicate dying and this is so real that no machines can detect life in it even person who is acting think he is dead, Which means Max have some other means to escape if he ever gets in that situation. - _Aoi2yrCommented
Licca Kusunoki
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Alisa Ilinichina Amiella 295049 - For my fellow cultured men.
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How'd I repeat that, lol.
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Since the author's not providing the image of the character unless the character unless the character's a harem member, I'll provide it myself.
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Imo, long coat ang joggers doesn't really blend well together.
They all looked towards the door and were stunned by the sight they saw. Only one word could describe what they were Seeing-Otherworldly! They saw a boy and a girl, both in their teens, standing at the door. The girl was wearing an ice-colored robe, she looked like a character out of an anime while the boy was wearing a black shirt and pants with black joggers and a long coat that reached his knees. They saw as the boy started to talk with the girl. - _Aoi2yrReplied to Normal_ROBNatsuo Fujii was waiting for the moving company to send his things from his flat to his new house. Still, until this moment, he didn't expect that his crush, who was also his teacher, would become his stepsister.
- _Aoi2yrReplied to Normal_ROB
Pretty sure Shishio has red hair, same with his aunt Chihiro.
Natsuo Fujii was waiting for the moving company to send his things from his flat to his new house. Still, until this moment, he didn't expect that his crush, who was also his teacher, would become his stepsister. - _Aoi2yrReplied to Pill_God
It's actually Universal Pull, iirc.
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Well, since it's Christmas, why not give the author a gift. An actual review. Writing Quality - 4/5 stars. The grammar's not perfect but pretty understandable like most fics here. Story Development - 3/5 stars. The mc doesn't have a goal. And sadly, I don't know why, but I'm not really liking where the story is developing. Maybe because like I said, the MC doesn't have a goal, or at least there was nothing mentioned. He just goes with the flow of fate which doesn't really make the story 'interesting'. Initially, I was really excited about the story when I first discovered it while I was skimming through the fan-fic section. I even gave all my power stones that I have everyday but it just left me dissapointed. Character Design - 3/5 stars. The MC's a psychopath that I don't have any problem with. But there is one thing that I can't help but feel irritated. Even if the author isn't doing it openly, the MC's getting nerfed which I don't like and mostly hate second only to NTR. The MC's a half-God, but it's not showing. Like I said in a previous comment before, even if he can't control his 'God' powers right now, he should be having some passive abilities he got from being one. Updating Stability - 5/5 stars. Daily updates are awesome. World Background - 4/5 stars. Nothing really changed about the world as of right now. I'll change the review once the fic progessess more, but right now, it's...meh.