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Review Detail of _Aoi in Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox

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_Aoi
_AoiLv22yr_Aoi

Well, since it's Christmas, why not give the author a gift. An actual review. Writing Quality - 4/5 stars. The grammar's not perfect but pretty understandable like most fics here. Story Development - 3/5 stars. The mc doesn't have a goal. And sadly, I don't know why, but I'm not really liking where the story is developing. Maybe because like I said, the MC doesn't have a goal, or at least there was nothing mentioned. He just goes with the flow of fate which doesn't really make the story 'interesting'. Initially, I was really excited about the story when I first discovered it while I was skimming through the fan-fic section. I even gave all my power stones that I have everyday but it just left me dissapointed. Character Design - 3/5 stars. The MC's a psychopath that I don't have any problem with. But there is one thing that I can't help but feel irritated. Even if the author isn't doing it openly, the MC's getting nerfed which I don't like and mostly hate second only to NTR. The MC's a half-God, but it's not showing. Like I said in a previous comment before, even if he can't control his 'God' powers right now, he should be having some passive abilities he got from being one. Updating Stability - 5/5 stars. Daily updates are awesome. World Background - 4/5 stars. Nothing really changed about the world as of right now. I'll change the review once the fic progessess more, but right now, it's...meh.

Date a Live: Inverse Spirit of Paradox

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Wryyyyyyyy
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Thanks for the detailed review! I'll make sure to fill up the certain flaws in the story as it progresses!

Shen_Yoru
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Good job 👍