im liking it so far

how long will your other story be on hiatus? im not the biggest fan of this one so far tbh

he wasnt nitpicking he asked a valid question 😂

alright thanks for letting me know. probably gonna stockpile them for a lil bit but good story so far keep it going

during the rocks era, he is currently in rock’s crew

true, plus it wouldve been better to learn more about his past in occasional flashbacks than 20+ chapters of flashback which so far really hasnt had much happening

how many chapters is there going to be on the labors?

i gotcha thanks for the reply and good story so far

how long is he going to be weak? also how long is he going to be under charles?

same he has like 8 storys and not a single one is even close to finished

how long will this flashback be? its not my taste, the beginning of ur story was the best imo and now i dont even look forward to reading the new chapters when u post

true i have no idea why its called a technology system (even if the author says technology is going to be important later, it shouldn’t have 100+ chapters with no technology at all to show for the supposed “technology system”)

100+ chapters and there still isnt any technology stuff happening waste of time tbh

quick question, when are we going to get into the technology part of the system ? 100+ chapters of a novel with technology system in the name but no technology . make it make since

real hasnt used the “technology “ system for anything besides potions

truth

facts story has gone stale with him just being a lap dog in every new chapter . its annoying asf he should’ve just been born at the same time as canon if all he is gonna do is be their lap dog

i like the story and the writing is good and all but for how much longer is he going to be the governments lap dog for? so far he hasn’t changed a single thing about canon just letting everything play out the same, so why was he even born back before canon if all he is going to do is be a good lap dog and not even change anything ?

when will the main character actually start doing something for the story? all he is doing is letting everything happen the same way as canon 😂

don’t spread hate? u spread hate on other authors works tho?