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somethingsomethin

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2021-10-24 JoinedUnited States
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin1yr
    Posted

    Magical Girl Sidekick is a fun and unique take on the magical girl genre that I haven't seen before. The characters are all likable and relatable, which made it easy to get into the story. The plot was interesting and fast-paced, with lots of twists and turns. Overall, this is a great light novel for anyone looking for something different from their usual read.

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    Magical Girl Sidekick
    Fantasy · Escape_Sequence
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Replied to mrant12

    Thank you so much for the encouraging words 🙏

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    AA!
    Urban · somethingsomethin
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Posted

    Hello, looks really good. The author has solid grammar, so it gives the read an easy flow. The characters have some depth to them as well. Cheers :)

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    [BL] Gentleman's valet
    LGBT+ · DDDylan
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Posted

    I can really feel the emotion of the main character. The author does a good job of conveying her inner life and that establishes a connection with the audience. The one thing I suggest, is to add some dialogue to the first chapter. Thanks for the swap!

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    This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together
    Urban · Rayne_Rue
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Posted

    This is really well-written. The author has really superior descriptive skills and a nice prose style. It's from a technical perspective everything is great. I think more updates would help a lot.

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    Stuck to You
    Fantasy · Soleil_Lynx
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Replied to Joyon

    🙏🙏🙏

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    AA!
    Urban · somethingsomethin
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Replied to Shaele

    Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm definitely writing it for my fellow weebs

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    Urban · somethingsomethin
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Posted

    I like the story. But there are a lot of technical problems with the writing. Still, if you're just looking for an engaging story and good world building it's still a good look.

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    The Hacker Girl
    Urban · Williane_M_P
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Posted

    Very good! Strong writing. Great world building. Definitely great if you like speculative story telling with solid action. The art on the cover is great too. Looking forward to more

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    Dimensional Overhaul
    Fantasy · DymenS
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Replied to AkuaSenpai

    That's very helpful feedback, thank you 🙏

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    AA!
    Urban · somethingsomethin
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Replied to DymenS

    Im glad a fellow weeb is enjoying it. I def need to spend more to time writing and less time playing melty blood 😂

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    AA!
    Urban · somethingsomethin
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  • somethingsomethin
    somethingsomethin2yr
    Posted

    Thanks everyone for reading so far. I've really enjoyed writing this. I have long term plans for this novel. It's just the beginning so please stick in there and I promise even more action and cool stuff to come

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    Urban · somethingsomethin
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