I was thinking of doing a reincarnation again and again for this story, where Valerian will keep reincarnated across ages from death. But naturally, I hope I could do this with my limited writing skills. Thanks for the review.

Took me a while to finish the first four chapters. It was amazingly written, although there is still a bit of a test-and-trial hiccup here and there because the Author appeared to be trying something new in between. As a regular reader of 1st-Manga-King's handiwork, I can vouch that this is written professionally and enthusiastically. Try taking a while to savor the chapters, because when you run through it for the second time, the story, your understanding, and hints will start to make more sense. This is simply one of the outstanding works of the author.

A story of Tobias. And a deep one, on top of that. Conspiracy, killing, and everything joined together to create a mystery that would make you read twice, and yet understand a little. Honestly speaking, it gave me the Hajime Kindaichi's vibe, yet very mysterious at the same time. I was made to reread the entire thing again, just because I thought I missed something. The mother, the father, the brother, all of them. Unless you sat tight on the sofa and read it, be prepared to be lost. Trust me, you'll love getting lost... I wouldn't tell others how far I went if I were you, young reader... Thread with care... (This is my previous review before the author re-loaded his story to an even better version. I demand a fast update, author. Fast update. If you don't mind, I am available via PM. Dun hesitate to send me all of them as my boxing day gift, thanks in advance)

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Obviously, there's a point why he drawn the one that everyone considered trash. What if, the coffee we thought was best wasn't arabica, but it was made for us to believe? What if, being vegan is actually to reduce the operating cost for the grocer? What if, they told us to use bidet because the cost to make paper was too high nowadays? Not everything told to you was truth, and that's including my spoilers. I maybe enjoy bullying the MC?

Will do my best. Updates at done until chapter 15. might take a few week and we'll be back to the main storyline again soon.

Oh my... This was purely amazing. I was usually a fast reader, but by reading this piece of work, I couldn't help but tried to read it slowly and savor the contents. Do you like how things were described in detail, touching every part of your personal thought? If you do, then this is going to be one of the few best first-person view stories you'll ever read. Even I, as a writer, would say I am lacking in many parts, especially in the detail. My favorite part is around chapters 30 to 40s, where MC is taking time hunting, selling them, and coming through the life of reality. It was harsh, yet enjoyable, mean, but logical, and not to forget a detail, but not overly explained. My praise is unworthy, but yours would do if you just went through the story and get immersed into what the world the author brought to us. Go ahead and try. I don't regret reading it, and you too.

You can expect three chaps after the time reset because the PS coincidentally reaches 100 PS in total. Also, Happy Birthday to you, Yasuke, Had a belated blast of a celebration on Monday!

A crazily well-written piece of work. It made my own book and the system came pale in comparison. To be honest, I am amazed by the naming sense, and storyline, as well as how well it was described without being lengthy. Furthermore, each chapter seems to link well with the next, without a hint of missing content in between. If I were to grade the book, I would say it only lacks the exposure necessary to get to the top. Easily one of the best read amongst the books in Webnovel.

A story of Tobias. And a deep one, on top of that. Conspiracy, killing, and everything joined together to create a mystery that would make you read twice, and yet understand a little. Honestly speaking, it gave me the Hajime Kindaichi's vibe, yet very mysterious at the same time. I was made to reread the entire thing again, just because I thought I missed something. The mother, the father, the brother, all of them. Unless you sat tight on the sofa and read it, be prepared to be lost. Trust me, you'll love getting lost... I wouldn't tell others how far I went if I were you, young reader... Thread with care...

Ahh.... Fellow sane hooman... Do you save your families as names to avoid bad stuff happens too?

[Hatred Value increase : 10,000] [Hatred Value increase : 20,000] [Hatred Value increase : 30,000] [Hatred Value increase : 40,000] Alright now, you have 100k Hatred Points. Its time spam update for 10 chapters in a flash. Beautifully, amazingly written piece of work. Completely qualified to be one of the best new novels in Webnovel. Please keep up the good work!

Binging the 19 Chapters available made me realized that my writing was too plain in comparison, honestly. The naming of characters keep bring me back as soon as the chapter ended, and honestly speaking, it was how the story were written that kept me back for more. One of the most readable ever book in WN with quality. Please keep up the great work and I look forward for more chapters.

Thank you, my Heavenly Sage for writing such an amazing book. I would even be open with those people reading this review here. Yes, I am here because it promises long chapters! Long to satisfy all my immersion. If you're someone who prefer really long chapters, this is your top choice. Grammar and storyline was well planned, amazing cover, and written with effort. Thank you for creating another amazing story for reading. I wish there would be more to follow. UPDATE MOAR PLEASE!

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Another totally superb work from Sloth. Always there to impress. The background is vivid and the author's effort in creating that story was purely impressive. Can't help but continue to look forward for more chapters to see how the book unveiled itself.

Had to say that I am thoroughly amazed by the quality of this book. My only complaint is that I had to stop my immersion halfway through chapter 82 because that's all there was for me to read. Brilliantly written and completely my cuppa of tea. Would really love to see more chapters and a crazier system the further the story goes. Thank you for writing another brilliant story, Dawn.

Wow. You have a pretty unhappy complaint right there. Shall I change some part in there to make it sound like ML pawns all stuff and treat the System like another dog spitting ivory so MC could get rich at chapter 1?

Also, him behaving like a lil virgin teenager is just for now, especially you cant include smexy stuff before contracted and going premium. Wouldn't wanna jeopadize my chance for contract. And most importantly, its potraying your author's lifelong dream. Nothing is better than taking some sweet advantage without being too pervert. You had to understand that pervert at a apex is aint pervert even if you're a pervert! LEARN! FELLOW DAOIST! LEARN!!!

Other people's Villain : Kill all the newbs, Slap all the haters, Kick all the doods, and sleep all da gurls. - Your Author's Villain definition: As long it potray I am a man with class, so what if I play with Minglan's peaks in pretense, bullied my classmates when I feel like doing so, or perhaps, extort the other party for all their wealth when I feel like it? (OOPS, no more of spoilers alert) Anyway, my villain aint shallow. That royal duke dad of his is quite irresponsible rite, but aint that norm to some normal richie families? Nothing to be bad about. It may be a prelude to some beechslaps later, like when the country fk up?