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  • zako4
    zako41yr
    Commented

    Kid's pretty op huh. Hopefully story moves on already.

    Ch 48 Wanted (9)
    Naruto: Akatsuki
    Anime & Comics · BravoBuds
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  • zako4
    zako41yr
    Replied to Ryukurou

    I read all your free chapters. Just because I said they're skippable doesn't mean I skipped them. My opinion was that I didn't like the story enough to spend coins after the free chapters. It was too predictable and generic with nothing truly special that I don't find it worth continuing. After reading ever so many books, you will find these cliches and similar plots but some are able to keep you engaged with unique characters, crafty dialogue or a vivid world. This story didn't do it for me, that's all.

    The Extra's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Ryukurou
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  • zako4
    zako41yr
    Posted

    Reincarnation in a cliché novel written as a cliché novel. Characters are one dimensional and pretty bland. They have their one personality trait and it heavily defines them. Not a lot of smart characters. A lot of the chapters are rather skippable honestly. A lot of generic ideas, some portions were nice sections to read though. MC is your typical reincarnated reader/author with near photographic memory who faces "struggles" gathering OP items or rather are really just gifted to them.

    The Extra's Odyssey
    Fantasy · Ryukurou
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Posted

    Enjoyable story however, it could be better. Lots of ideas for tower climbs hopefully there's uniqueness in this story. The story pre 20 chapters lack the aspect of showing rather than telling. A lot of summaries and info at times. Dialogue can help improve the flow. Somewhat improved after chapter 20. Readability is good. Pacing is fine. Not a fan of the inventory, it didn't align with the sovereign of water. Felt like gates of babylyon from Fate or just a MC buff honestly. MC is a pretty cliche reincarnated gamer pro of the game with nearly perfect knowledge of the game. Though, reality had some differences which was good. Still he's nothing noteworthy.

    I BECAME A GAME'S VILLAIN
    Fantasy · Sei1997
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    Getting Gary stu vibes

    Ch 111 Casting the Bait.
    Saharan Successor
    Book&Literature · Morpheus_vos
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    How does the chatbox work again?

    Ch 80 The Necromancer’s End
    Saharan Successor
    Book&Literature · Morpheus_vos
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    Keep up the good work, wonder what's that about.

    Ch 15 A Dead End?
    Assassination Through the Netherworld
    Fantasy · Photosphere
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Replied to Morpheus_vos

    Prob expected SS, I noticed almost all authors here put extremely high core ratings or even unlimited potential. Glad it was A core, his early game has been stacked already. There was also the added bonus of chaos I believe? Room for growth.

    Ch 64 Mana Core
    Saharan Successor
    Book&Literature · Morpheus_vos
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    Feels kind of repetitive lately but it might just be the Pokémon genre itself for me. I think it was the third or fourth Pokémon mock battle tournament for training lasting 10-15 chapters.

    Ch 258 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 258
    Pokemon: Master of tactics
    Anime & Comics · alex02373
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Replied to SilentWraithz

    Well she is a transmigrator too but Mirette's reaction to spilled food made by Zoemi as courting death is lol. Those two definitely suit each other. Won't be surprised if this situation just gets brushed under the rug even with everyone watching.

    Ch 47 Chapter 9 - Can a new event be created? (part 10)
    Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
    Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    So I'm assuming that he's been top 1% of his age group from the beginning and then got a grimoire for another power boost? Then trained 2 years with the strongest lower realm swordsman. Then he would be already extremely strong when returning to the holy kingdom unless compared to people 20+ older experience. How was he chosen for the grimoire again, felt like I missed it?

    Ch 17 Chapter 17: Time to leave
    Seven Hearts: The path of darkness
    Fantasy · ClashingBlades98
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    Story lacks basic punctuation. Some grammar issues in every chapter. Hope the story doesn't revolve heavily on the system. Didn't like the introduction to it anyway.

    Ch 9 Disgust
    Frankenstein Rises
    Fantasy · Lord_Sadness
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Replied to VashuRajput269

    Well given half his face is scarred, it already gives an intimating atmosphere to become friends with his lady. But, yeah him ignoring everyone while day dreaming reflects poorly on his and his ladies reputation. Comes off as a rude and undisciplined butler while his lady is tolerant of it though this is just one incident. It's like entertaining a guest and being in your own world, first impressions.

    Ch 40 Chapter 9 - Can a new event be created? (part 3)
    Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
    Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    Nice

    Ch 252 Pokemon master of tactics: Chapter 252
    Pokemon: Master of tactics
    Anime & Comics · alex02373
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Posted

    Story with smart characters. Unexpected twists and turns. The characters felt great throughout the read though it was a rather small cast of characters. Throughout the story, the ML and FL go through immense and realistic character growth. The story keeps you thinking and engaged with questions and mysteries along with suspenseful moments. Enjoyable read.

    Imposter System
    Sci-fi · Pill_Guy
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Posted

    Nothing too special so far, characters felt kind of generic. There's also a lot of named characters early on in the story and there might be problems developing all of them thoroughly without dragging the story. Story hasn't progressed much still at the early stages of an academy arc. The story has potential, hopefully it deviates from typical academy stories revolving beast slaying. There was steampunk elements which aren't typically written about for a unique flavor.

    Generation of Heroes
    Fantasy · MiuNovels
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Posted

    Can't take the story seriously. The story itself seems serious and interesting but the jokes are too forced. The premise of the story seemed good but the jokes broke the balance. Would had been a good without the time God info dumping and making dumb jokes.

    Ascension of the Nephilim
    Fantasy · Rapture_Tales
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    His obsession with Miriette he got from the game is way over the top. His thinking process is so corrupted that he's willing to do anything for her. Man's brain is messed up.

    Ch 20 Chapter 6 - awakening and Awakening (part 1)
    Reincarnated as the Villainess's attendant
    Fantasy · Sound_Hammer
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Posted

    Enjoyable read however, people may get turned off from the beginning. MC has problems with his slavery and mate pairing to an unlikeable character(not main FMC). This is only prominent within the first volume and even after 20 chapters from the start, it lessens a considerable amount and was quite tolerable. The mate idea so far is a subplot to many different characters and doesn't entirely effect MC's decision making. It is well worth it to push onto Vol 2 and 3. *For people who don't like her, she hasn't been the main focus nor frequently appearing in vol 2 and 3.* The story itself is well written and fight scenes are good. There is a lot of gore and dark elements in the story. World building is slowly built and explained through conversations. There's not much info dumping if any. Some POV changes but not much for people who don't like them still good providing other characters thoughts. Characters are good, some are unlikeable, and unredeemable while you have there counterparts. Variety of different characters and people actually die for their own choices and actions. There are consequences even for the MC. The MC himself is naïve and curious about the world considering his whole life has been in a coliseum. He makes mistakes and learns from them. A story of his journey and self discovery would definitely recommend, well deserved rating.

    Realm Wars
    Fantasy · MiuNovels
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  • zako4
    zako42yr
    Commented

    Felt like the power balance was off with Kira here. Considering that it was her first day and she's already killing C rank monsters. It took awhile for Noah and Alice to reach that level. I'm assuming that the equipment plays the biggest role?

    Ch 69 Flames of Emotions
    The Eternal Battlefield
    Fantasy · GoldSoul
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