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zako4

zako4

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2021-10-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Commented

    Kid's pretty op huh. Hopefully story moves on already.

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Replied to Ryukurou

    I read all your free chapters. Just because I said they're skippable doesn't mean I skipped them. My opinion was that I didn't like the story enough to spend coins after the free chapters. It was too predictable and generic with nothing truly special that I don't find it worth continuing. After reading ever so many books, you will find these cliches and similar plots but some are able to keep you engaged with unique characters, crafty dialogue or a vivid world. This story didn't do it for me, that's all.

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Posted

    Reincarnation in a cliché novel written as a cliché novel. Characters are one dimensional and pretty bland. They have their one personality trait and it heavily defines them. Not a lot of smart characters. A lot of the chapters are rather skippable honestly. A lot of generic ideas, some portions were nice sections to read though. MC is your typical reincarnated reader/author with near photographic memory who faces "struggles" gathering OP items or rather are really just gifted to them.

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Posted

    Enjoyable story however, it could be better. Lots of ideas for tower climbs hopefully there's uniqueness in this story. The story pre 20 chapters lack the aspect of showing rather than telling. A lot of summaries and info at times. Dialogue can help improve the flow. Somewhat improved after chapter 20. Readability is good. Pacing is fine. Not a fan of the inventory, it didn't align with the sovereign of water. Felt like gates of babylyon from Fate or just a MC buff honestly. MC is a pretty cliche reincarnated gamer pro of the game with nearly perfect knowledge of the game. Though, reality had some differences which was good. Still he's nothing noteworthy.

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Commented

    Getting Gary stu vibes

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Commented

    How does the chatbox work again?

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Commented

    Keep up the good work, wonder what's that about.

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Replied to SaltyJOKER

    Prob expected SS, I noticed almost all authors here put extremely high core ratings or even unlimited potential. Glad it was A core, his early game has been stacked already. There was also the added bonus of chaos I believe? Room for growth.

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Commented

    Feels kind of repetitive lately but it might just be the Pokémon genre itself for me. I think it was the third or fourth Pokémon mock battle tournament for training lasting 10-15 chapters.

  • zako4
    zako44 years ago
    Replied to SilentWraithz

    Well she is a transmigrator too but Mirette's reaction to spilled food made by Zoemi as courting death is lol. Those two definitely suit each other. Won't be surprised if this situation just gets brushed under the rug even with everyone watching.