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Wuji_Taisa

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  • Wuji_Taisa2 years ago
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    like the way the chapters are being revised and the plot is easier to follow, can you focus more on it first and not add more new chapters for the moment? Stuck at the 58th chapter and just wondering what is happening man.. do something about it

  • Wuji_Taisa3 years ago
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    like the direction but can you add more characters, especially at school to broaden the chapter and possibilities. That part about being watched could have also used some work to create some conflict between the MC and the perpetrator. Good start keep going

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