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writing 2 books at the same timw

Very bad and bland book he suddenly becomes good at negotiation, busssiness, racing, volleyball and more if this was systems powers, i would be satisfied but no and author has also handled relationships and interactions with lovers, family and friends very badly will not say more cause this book doesnot deserve my time and save yours too

I was not even able to get past 63 chaps

good things of this book 1. idea of story bad things 1. everything else

one more thing is MC is an exhibitionist and doesnt shy away from showing his girls naked to strangers not just to one being cucked

Things I like about this book 1. MCs personality 2. World background 3. Real villain MC not just in name 4. Netori scenes Things I don't like 1. R18 scenes too long 2. So little interaction scenes btw main cast 3. Less storyline focus 4. Sometimes characters are invisible 5. Little bit of netorase during the time girls are being conquered or before conquering 6. Too much skips in scenes and important information that we have to read btw the lines or should I say btw chapters

we got rejected author from webnovel story before gta 6

question here does this have a person who betrayed MC and killed him and now MCs goal is to kill him and the whole story revolves around killing him in the end?

he smokes very often does this really to be added if you dont add the smoking everyone is happy why insist on specially adding it just to get under some peoples nerves