I didn't expect much, but the story is really amazing. Large chapters, high quality writing, interesting mc, world with lots of details, everything to be a great novel.

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This synopsis really managed to capture my attention. This synopsis really managed to capture my attention. This synopsis really managed to capture my attention.

A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere

A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere

Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!Could be better!

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I had reviewed this same book before, thanks for continuing!

I had reviewed this same book before, thanks for continuing!

I had reviewed this same book before, thanks for continuing!

I had reviewed this same book before, thanks for continuing!

I had reviewed this same book before, thanks for continuing!

I had reviewed this same book before, thanks for continuing!

"this has a lot of potential"

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter