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The start felt kinda dragging but overall it's a great first chapter. Enjoyed it!
An interesting concept, to say the least. The story feels compelling and gripping. The first chapter does as good enough of job of grabbing the readers intrest. Some sentences do feel streched but that's just nit-picking from my side. Anyway, an enjoyable read.
Calling this a great book would be an understatement. I'm 22 chapters in and boy, is the word play heavenly. The plot slowly builds up, engulfing the reader's mind chapter by chapter as we approach the high point. In short it's a well crafted peice with intense story and excellent word play. I absolutely love it!.
Benjamin is kinda intriguing.
Things just got a lot more interesting in just a few lines.
The devil hound and the thief is when you take a wonderful idea and give it an excellent execution. Saying that the devil hound and the thief is a great story would be an understatement, the writing style and the plot are unique but the coherence and consistency is the real charm here. Not once in the story was I ever bored. The story is fast-paced and MC is likeable and not generic, quite refreshing to be very honest. There is just one slight issue here; there are certain chapters which have pacing issues, though they might just be specific to me since I have read fast paced novels for most of my life. Other than that, it's a wonderful story.
The story starts with a beautiful example of in media res and what follows is truly captivating and marvelous. The initial chapters establishes the characters and plots like puzzle pieces, each fitting into one another. The traits and core aspects of the protagonists are well established. It's well paced and the premise just adds on it. All in all, a great story!