fleit_askar

Man i wish you could have made english review, i always check for bad reviews first before giving new novel a try. Would have loved to know why you rated it bad.

Sounds like Chatgpt Review

If Sadist or whatever i love the way he is turning to be. hate driven revenge plots are the best juice out there to drink.

Incredible so far, beyond what you usually find here on Webnovel. Premise amazing! Story? highly engaging! Action and battle scenes? Superb!! The Sauce?....beyond tasty. I can highly recommend giving this wonderful piece of work a try.

A story that had promising start at the beginning but failing to grasp the reader throughout the first 20-30 chapters. Mainly failing due to character engaging with each other in hollow empty way, character actions being described in pretty shallow structure and mc acting in cringy hard to bear behavior taking into account both his lives expierences. "chapter 16" Archer feeling hungry and bringing out two meats scoffing them down. So much more could have been added to describe this. From the typical stomach growling to how the meat was prepared to last him or how it tasted..so on and so forth. This is authors first novel but i hate to take such fact into account to raise a review solely because of this factor alone. The very first couple of chapters are often the dealbreakers for readers, making it even more important for them to be well done.

That seems hard to manage when the character trait of Riel you mentioned is sort of his main selling point too as MC. But i defintily agree, seeing the relationships be developed bit more and having more scenes where MC shows his love and care to the characters.

I know this is just the beginning but its already getting tiring to see the Skills being quotted everytime while they have been mentioned already.

So he literally ripped the wolfs heart out? And ate it too? ....so humanoids as well? ...not sure how to feel about that.

its such pleasure to see you adding so much plot and story into playing music instruments and different musice titles MC plays. thanks for chap. hoping to see MC mom and sister hear his current amazing progress in music.

Finally someone speaking the truth