Deeply Racist and terrible grammar, it reads like a typical chinese Novel with racism everywhere. Deeply Racist and terrible grammar, it reads like a typical chinese Novel with racism everywhere.

A good story with a MC who has a full fleshed personality and its written in a style that allows to work with the crossover from the different TV shows without losing quality.

Its a story about a ex prisoner who broke into a villa and caused a acident that hurt a celebrity so much that he cant work anymore and shows no remorse about it. The MC wynt to be a star in Hollywood and because his first try at an audition dont worked he started filming acidents and crime scenes to earn money. I just read till to chapter 20 but he akready broje the law again because he filmed a murder killing and sold the tape to the news because he dont get money by giving it to the police.

I like this chapter it is a funny side of his success and make the story deeper i would like mor of it, like be asked for his autogramm or others aspects if change in his privat life as a celebrity.

thanks for writing, your crossover story is fun to read and better than most storys i see on webnovel.

So long Sucker for you too. Good luck in the School and stay healthy.

Its stealing posting a story from an author without permission even when you dont make money of the story. The original title is Voleur D'âme and not the one you wrote, just delete your stolen content.

A good MC with a realistic background and realistic war politics in his deployment as a soldier. He is very powerful but not like a one punch man. The OC from Marvel have deepth to them abd dont feel like cardboardmen.

Xou made a editing error with this chapter, you have a few times the same text back to back.

Hellor are you a bot or did you not read the comments? On Archive on our own are 67 chapter from the original author, but the author didnt write mor chapter for almost year now.

The writing need change, most of the sentences begin with I or have I in them. It read like writen by a gradschooler. Maybe switch between a first person and a third person narrator while writing.

A good story so for at 9 chapter. I love the system with its sass and funny personality. The OC is not overpowerd from the start and i find it realistic that the Marine try to paint Luffy and Co as the bad guys instead of the Marine Captain.

Marine POV: I got shot and maybe get killed, where is my camera maybe i get a selfie with them.

Its a quaffle that you use to score 10 points. A snitch would end the game and award 150 points.

can you recommend any showbiz storys?

No problem, take your time.

Maybe as punishment because he destroyed his eyes himself. For the clan he destroyed his worth as a ninja they couldnt control him longer. If it would be possible more ninja would change to normal eyes to live free from the seal.

Hot DC cougars in your area want to f you (and maybe kill and rob you).

Good Luck with you Exams.

What about the Blues Brothers.