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Evil Main Characters and Revenge plots is where I'm at.This is the place for dark-fantasy fans that need a little bit of gore and trauma in their library.

2021-09-17 JoinedUnited States
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Replied to Maximus1334

    Thank you for your comment! It means very much to me that my story can bring out the emotions that I want from my readers.

    Ch 1 Burnt Down House
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    BadStripes1yr
    Replied to Maximus1334

    thanks for catching that!

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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    Zac's character design - AI generated. It is as close as I can get to how he looks. Just focus more on the face than the clothes.

    Ch 21 Elegant Transformation
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    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    Galen's character design is now available: AI Generated

    Ch 21 Elegant Transformation
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Replied to Senaio

    until it's built up correctly, until he's reached an age where he can actually do something.

    Ch 18 Untouched
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Posted

    Great story. I guess the only thing I didn't really like was how fast he was to realize that he got reincarnated but everything else is good.

    I created Magic!
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    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    Katrina's character art is now available: AI-Generated.

    Ch 14 Like a Mannequin
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    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    Ray's character art is now available: AI-Generated.

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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Posted

    Author's Review: The beginning is a bit shabby. It could have been better if I had the writing skills or had put more effort into it. The stability of updates is not the best, and I will sometimes do weekly uploads or daily. Depends on my mood, imagination, and motivation. Overall the updates(to me) are the worst part. I am doing my best to improve my writing skills, make things more interesting and make them make sense. I can't accurately review my world background or character design. That is for you readers to decide. Please leave feedback with your thoughts and suggestions on how I can make something better, and criticism is welcomed.

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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Replied to Ramsanga

    your review is much appreciated. if you have any comments or feedback about what can be edited or have any tips that would help the story out, would also mean very much. I'm open to criticism as well.

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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    Chapter Updated. Makes more sense now ig. Please, boost my ego by telling me how great it is :')

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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Replied to Rajesh_Negi

    When you want to go skydiving, you want the donut go back to whale when someone thinks they feel please just want you to let you know when sometimes the heart flies they also can't catch the bug.

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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Posted

    Very interesting. There were definitely some sentences that could've been re-worded, but I love the whole background of her being an alien and world background is simple, but it is great because a lot of people are familiar with New York, which saves you time having to describe the kind of place they are in.

    The Last Moon (Book 1 : He Could Be The One)
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    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    "Something on your mind, Mrs -?" Would sound better here in my opinion

    "Thinking something, Mrs. -?" 
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    This Chapter was updated to give the mother more of a personality. Hopefully, this sounds better.

    Ch 1 Burnt Down House
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Replied to Bigreddev
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Posted

    I do say, if the flimper flomper had dimper domper, then that would mean skimper skomper was a swimper swomper.

    rewriting....
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    The eminence in shadow mc vibes XD

    Even though his face was relatively normal, his body is really athletic and fit compared to others. He is really taking care of his body just to make up for his bland face. He is doing all this just so he can at least brag something about himself.
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    I'm coming back!

    So, after 3 months, I come back to see my views and collections slowly rising. I was invited as a contract author(Not officially one) I was originally going to cancel this novel because of all the work I had, but seeing my novel getting noticed by a few of you, I decided to bring this novel back up. It will take some time for me to write the chapters and pile some up for next month, so I ask that you give me a few weeks. Chapter 12 I promised two chapters in a row but didn't post on my promise, for that, I genuinely apologize. I will start writing again, pile up, and get this on a steady schedule, all chapters will be weekly. Thank you again, for viewing my novel, and can't wait to see you again.
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  • BadStripes
    BadStripes1yr
    Commented

    2 "had"

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