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you could incorporate different movies like caligula, then tv shows like spartacus or any other old kingdom or ancient Rome themed shows or movies the set them up as a multiverse or multicross and put the real actor or actresses pictures in their on set clothes in an auxiliary chapter this way people will have better visualisation of what the characters are doing in the book as we've seen them perform different emotions on the silver screens so when you incorporate them like this we can imagine the angry facd or lustful fave in the tv abd better inagine your work thus enhancing and maximising both of our experience of this book and i shared all of this in confidence coz you asked so if you or anyone disagrees then i agree too

Thank you author for your reply and telling me about your plan to edit it in the future and as promised I'll delete this review by this time tomorrow and please feel free to use the app audify to browse you're novels chapter 1 url link to understand what am talking about or this apps built-in voice as it's just a continuous monologue and just a little use of coma and full stop will give pauses between sentences making it more humane and much more enjoyable and please dont think only disabled person uses audio or other text to speech read aloud apps coz i know many people who use them to listen to novels while cooking,driveing and doing other miscellaneous task for both efficiency and making grunt work more enjoyable so dont underestimate this feature so if nothing els just the commas and fullstops will make this novel go so far in terms of these problems and as an author you're more then good enough so don't let them tell you other wise coz we all could be better but belittling what we are is just a downfall

Yes bro i am and also i live closer to one of the collision points so i understand what you're talking about pluse one of our university student got shot and many injured so i hope you stay safe and keep on doing what you love doing coz we support you in your endeavours

Am from the same place auther so please take care of yourself i don't see many writers from our place so you guys have a special spot in my heart besides the novel is good with full of articulate information that makes this more real then so many other novels of the same genre so thank you and stay safe and nothing but prayers and best of wishes for you as a fellow countryman 🫡 Respect!!