u could say she has no cheats and worked hard but her development is kinda forced imo so is her relationship with sasuke and her personality is disgusting.

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Depends on what kinda story it is not everything is mv traveller god mess

Ithinkitdependsonthemastery

Kenjutsu is okay just very bland. There is no cultivation so that is good. I do like bikujutsu.

No that is oxygen breathing

In terms of skill

Some of this stuff was explained like the compensation is not for him specifically but for the all the orphans who lost their parents in the war and for the system I think that having a very op system just gets boring and when the becomes op I just do not care about their growth cause they are already op. Just them insulting people and causing trouble or going into hiding for some years and reappearing to cause more trouble. But also I get why you do not like some stuff like dungeon and system. I personally do not mind they are just there but I get it. I honestly think the mc is growing at an okay rate maybe a little bit too fast.

wasn't this rulers authority

I like the story I just do not like the wives think especially the age gap and the way he planned it I am also not a fan of harem. I get that people like this stuff but not for me. I also think that having mc getting all those wives is kind of forced it seems like these wives have no dignity making me think lower of them and the only reason they are relevant is because the mc likes them I feel like it takes away all that they have worked for in the canon and makes them useless simps who are only strong cuz mc has to have strong wives. I also prefer a more steady growth where the mc becomes strong but not as fast. Maybe a few steps faster the Kakashi and then the major changes in strength come when older or during war. But I respect the dedication the author has put into the story and I get how people like this story some of the decisions made here are not for me but I also do not think they are necessarily bad choices depending on the target audience so I do recommend you to give it a shot there are a lot of chapters and if you end up liking it lots of content for you to enjoy.

When do you think you will release?

like killua?

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that can enlarge and go hand in hand with the spatial abilities

maybe like shurikens

I agree with this comment

I think that would be just a small feature of the umbrella I hope. I also think the bullets should not be normal and it should be able to fire out other types of attacks

i think that is okay and I think ik the novel but I read it as a manhwa was it about a guy who was a pro player in a pro team the he gave away his account and then he joined an internet café and became an employee there then started playing the game again.

The chapters are fast. I give four star because being in the same team as as 7 is a bit too used for me and it is still very early in the story at the time of reviewing. But I do suggest that you tap more into the concept of weapons as I see everyone is focusing on ninjutsu and eight gates nowadays and some fuinjutsu. But never enough of bikujutsu(hope I spelled tight. Stuff like kenjutsu is cool. I think that enlarging shurikens into fuma shurikens and stuff like that.