i like the way you discribe each character's

not bad, but you need to improve

nice introducing

I love this book. when ever I read this book, l feel like I am watching a movie. I can't wait for the movie of your book to be acted. I hope wednovel make a move so your book will be acted as a movie. love you.

I love the action, the war, and the romances in the book. when ever your books comes to my mind I imagine it as a movie that I am watching. I really do hope webnovel make an arrangement of your book to be acted as a movie it will be more better than reading. I know wednovel must have given you contract, keep it up.

Nice beginning. Quite deep, I like your sense of reasoning. I never imagined the main character will turn out to be a psychopath. The book is twisted and we'll written for a first timer. well done , but keep the chapters coming

Well written with just enough suspense, a Little bit dark but thoughtful.

Well developed with deep thoughts, a little bit dark but well written