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ScatteredCloud8mthReplied to tactless91still tho, even if you're all good with that like mentally stable and whatnot, what if ur gun got stealed and used by another person? for example if you use a case of school shooting the culprit would be student who got bullied, they can just got the gun from their house you see.
"No hate but, as expected of Free America, a 100% weapon drop rate."- ScatteredCloud1yrReplied to Apollyon_
agree, i appreciate this kind of set up, it don't feel anything cliche or else so why not? this was fun to read and we got to see roughly MC's personality from there too
The god he had met was a cynical being, it had sent only one messenger to earth, and it had only ever given a reward to two human beings. - ScatteredCloud2yrCommented
author, i don't know where's your direction of making the mc act like this, but if you really don't know what you are doing then that's definitely wrong, what's with the "if you don't want to worship me.." thing. MC is a God, no way a God would blatantly said it's fine if you don't want to worship me again, you are Supposed to be loyal to your religion, loyal to your God. if the God himself didn't mind let go of his worshiper then what's the point of preaching to belief in him, just make a religion and let them come if they want, because you fine let them go if they want this is the second problem i have from the act of him being a God, the first is when he said he's not perfect to people, heck what kind of future situation would be when people said that even the God's not perfect, it is Supposed that only God are perfect
"Treat the divine kingdom as your home. If you continue to worship me, you will be allowed to stay inside the residences. If you don't want to worship me, you can enter the cycle of reincarnation and forget everything." - ScatteredCloud2yrReplied to Liars_Hood
i almost hit my head with anything near me when i read those sentence, if you wanna act like someone then do it your all, acting like a God but showing act of an human, how's your creature will have a fear and respect upon the mighty lord
"But be aware. Humanity is created in my image. And I am not perfect. Selfishness, Greed, Egotistic, and Prideful are just some of the bad qualities of humanity." Matthias continued,"But even though that is the case, humans also do have their good qualities. Righteousness, Kindness, benevolence, and respectfulness are just some of humanity's good qualities." - ScatteredCloud2yrReplied to DDclash
still you can choose to play it freely instead of buy a whole thing and regret if you didn't like it after
"You could speed up the time by paying 4 million Creation Points to unlock the function." - ScatteredCloud2yrReplied to Master_Cheif
+1
Looking at the women that was currently in her hero outfit, she couldn't help but think 'Hmm, she could be too old for him, but I do remember Madara saying that he wouldn't mind being with an older women.' - ScatteredCloud2yrCommented
sigh, this novel is so good despite this some of forced plot... or Will show many more later i don't know. i feel stupid with the way mc treat the incident, like before when he innocently follow the foreman, haven't he have a little suspicion when he dragged alone deep to the cave? and this part, that foreman is key point for the plot that Lambert do. and they just.. gave him to the Castle? whoa really, its the Castle, Lambert nest, even he got spyed inside the Castle before, he didnt order his soldier to hold the foreman with them? clearly a forced plot, doesnt make sense with the way he be shown so smart and with the way now was his second life, and not long ago he got backstabbed but he still careless let the foreman prisoned in the castle. anyway the story still good and interesting but im sure you can make it in a more realistic way for a thing that would happen
Berengar, however, knew that this was clearly the work of Lambert and his allies cleaning up their mess. The only witness he had to his brother's ploy was Linde, and Berengar refused to play that card; she was a valuable spy not only against Lambert but her father as well. He would not expose such a precious asset against his enemies in a rash attempt to expose Lambert's machinations. - ScatteredCloud2yrReplied to Orcanaman
still, just three order before the king was such a small and too simple hierarchy, if there's like Marquis and viscount the gap between the nobles Will be felt
The leaders of these territories were Kings in their own right and held varying control over the vassals beneath them, which were split into Duchies. These Dukes ruled over the various Counts whose land comprised the territory of the Duchy, and the Counts presided over the Barons, who in turn presided over minor lords and their knights. - ScatteredCloud2yrReplied to ShadowWanderer
thought the same, if berengar die then Lambert or the entire palace Will already informed by the time Baron and servant back from hunting, lol like what was the point of having a dinner like nothing while the first son is die
When Berengar finally entered the Dining room, he saw Lambert with a wicked smile on his face, he was the first to arrive, and the teenage youth was certain he would be enjoying the feast without his older brother this night. - ScatteredCloud2yrReplied to Kaszrago
very much agree, this part is clearly not for you vanilla guys who don't like this degraded things, you may look normal by saying it public that you don't like this thing, but you can't Deny the fact that there's so many who lowkey into this stuff but just enjoy it in silence since this so called normal vanilla despise this thing and called the other freak
Though he would not know it now, one day, Linde would become the director of Berengar's extensive spy network and his personal concubine. A relationship in which a dynasty would be built upon... - ScatteredCloud2yrCommented
uhh author, are this is gonna be fighting ROB or some otherworldy power being stood in ainz and friends way? i'm so hooked to this fic that i'm perplexed because that thing is just not my cup of tea, but i also want to read more since your writing is just that good
Ch 5 Chapter 5 - Plans set in Motion. - ScatteredCloud2yrReplied to Tito_Falxus
i'm praying for this too
For some reason, a vision flashed in Tabula's mind of a large chessboard and the same man that guided him into moving pieces at his leisure. He saw himself and people around him as pieces on a board and nothing more. - ScatteredCloud2yrCommented
this is just perfect author-san. your detailed works is on another level among other fanfic! i really appreciate that by far this is stick to Canon and that you are not adding weird story background original, because some other fanfic has done that by putting the oc for purpose of nerving mc, it is more weird if the story it self like overlord that the real threat for ainz and nazarick is world item
Ch 4 Chapter 4 - Battle for Carne Village, the New Gods - ScatteredCloud2yrReplied to mikepeterjack
yes
So, soldiers weren't overly strong. That was a relief. Now he decided to test the weakest attack spell he still had - 5th tier spell Dragon Lightning.