you're an amazing author really don't let this mistake set u back you're doing a great a job and I'm happy to be reading this masterpiece of yours .keep up the good work please

he is kinda right i mean they fight monsters that could topple towns but they can't jump a ten meter river

while he was brawling with that big dude while saving sariel'son you said that he knows a little bit of takewondo

for those who don't know french it means 'ok i'm listening but any ill intentions i leave'

french ?? noicee😂😂

there was like 8 chapters when i started

i ve been reading since the beginning i just stopped for a while so that the chapters accumulate then i returned to reading

more more more yo've been away for so long please update more

cool

all the comments above are saying anime world it means the mc is probably going to stay in the dark by shape-shifting and acting like he is from that world i don't hate the idea but it's like writing a new fan-fic based on that word you know it's complicated i don't mind seeing it once in a while when it really should be that way otherwise it's better if you keep the demon persona being summoned making contacts exploiting them and all that stuff ps:I'm just giving my opinion about it's your call author also i like the work your doing it's truly sad there are no cmdk fan-fics out there i really want to see the end of this especially after the original stopped about 3 years ago

the best mha fan-fic i ever read so far even though it only has four chapters please do continue writing good job author

i don't know why all those people are saying that what you did is a red flag and going to abandon your story i don't see anything wrong with so just keep up the good work i like your story and if you don't mind i'm ready to be the only reader if push comes to shove don't worry about those toxic people they are a bunch who just don't want to see others succeed

wonderful chapter continue

i noticed it thank you but it's really hard to write you know everyone has a lot of s*** in their life especially mine so you either wait or idk try writing like i did i used to be fed with authors that don't update a lot and now I'm one of em

amazing just try to make the chapters a lil bit longer

the fighting scene was good but you can improve ot more i guess otherwise amazing chapter keep up the good work

good job there the writing quality is quite good and the story is coming along very well also try to make the chapters a lil bit longer otherwise keep up the good work I'm looking forward to the next chapters

are you talking about Mathias from sarahan's successor by any chance ??!

niceeee good work author

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