a very unique take on a BNHA fanfiction. love the implementation of GOH elements along with a quirk that's perfect for the MC. writing quality is better than most things published on this platform and the story development is going at a perfect pace. keep up the work and I'll be awaiting more.

this deserves 5 stars just for the author following jojo stand themes of being named after a song......................................................

only thing i could wish for out of this is if there were more frequent chapter updates.................................................................

why ntr? out of every genre you could have picked it was cuck and ntr........................................................................................

most likely this used to be a one piece novel but got dropped and the author used this page to post a new fanfic after deleting the chapters from the other one

Writing Quality: Seems really good, doesn't seem to have any noticeable mistakes that will cause you to have to re-read it. Update Stability: updates seem to be frequent with enough time in-between them. It seems the author prepares 3 chapters and posts them 1 hour apart each. Story development: MHA where it seems like females are dominants over men, a common fanfic idea. Development seems to be going at a nice rate not going to fast or slow. Character Design: MC is a OC!Izuku where he has a terrible mother which causes him to have a lot of trust issues and built up emotion, hopefully we can see some improvement with the help of UA when the author get's there. World Background: MHA world where woman dominate over men, Men seem to be treated poorly while woman are cast upon a high pedestal. Some characters seem to be gender-bent such as Katsuki and All-Might (Maybe Endeavor to but I didn't seem an indication.). Personally I like this type of background because the character personality's for people beside Inko and Izuku doesn't seem to be changed to much which is nice I hope you enjoyed my review, definitely going to keep reading this if it continues nicely

I do very much like this but it is confusing to keep track of what's happening. i dont mind the OP MC and like how your telling his backstory on where he is today but when you make a flashback chapter every other chapter it gets really confusing to keep track of what's happening in the present time.

Writing Quality: Very Good, not sounding like a Chinese novel translated Update Stability: Seems very often with a good break in-between each update to ensure quality, very appreciated Story Development: a little to fast past but its fine as it's made up with the writing quality, story development is good and definitely has potential to be one of the better danmachi fics on webnovel Character Design: MC is a simp for hephaestus BUT he is a good simp. He's not over bearing or overly-possessive but is kind, compassionate and treats her as an equal. He is also confident but not overly so and knows when to stop. He is also very cautious of other gods and even informs hephaestus about Freya as Syr, he also knows not to be scammed by Loki. World Background: Danmachi a great world and has a lot of potential within it and i'm glad to see it being used

Ya know, I wish i could write a full detailed review on it but i can't because the single word i think of after reading this is amazement. I really hope this keeps going strong because my god is this fucking good.

Writing Quality: Use Grammarly to fix it Update Stability: one of the only reasons this isn't 1 star Story Development: Way to fast paced, Luffy wanting to become a marine? Character Design: Mc takes over luffy's body AFTER he meets shanks and decides to become marine admiral, his was of speaking is terrible and only has 1-2 good moments World Background: the other reason this isn't 1 star, it's one piece

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Oh please great Tobi-Sama, Please grant these mere mortal's with your tales. Even if we haven't deserved to hear such great tales I beg of thy to provide at least 1 more.

thank you for telling me what you thought. I never noticed that I had done this before as I was just going with the flow of my writing so i will definitely try and improve myself.

I love this so much. Not only is there a great story line so far but it keeps me wanting to come back for more. Jaune is OP for the world of remnant but I'm expecting he wont stay there permanently like when he went to Danmanchi. Jaune as a character as a good personality, isn't over confidant as he knows he isnt the strongest in the multiverse and he's not one of those harem protagonists that are just interested in a girls body like heck, the only one he love's so far is Scathach. If this turns into a harem with like 5-12 girls i'll probably rate it at a 4.5 just because of my personal preference but right now the story is perfect and I can't wait for more PS; I would give an extra .5 stars if i could for making aurther pendragon a male while training Jaune

Cant wait for the next chapter

Hey guys just wanted to say feel free to give me some feedback on this! it's my first time writing a novel so feel free to write a reply

I like the idea behind it, but the quality of the writing is bad. I like the idea of the MC having Majin Buu's ability's, but the fact that there isn't a limit or a way for the MC to unlock them is really terrible. The MC could just straight up go to whitebeard, kaido, big mom, garp or any of the OP characters, turn them into candy then gain there strength. There is also a problem with the actually writing fluidity. The fluidity of the writing along with the grammar mistakes (which i looked passes as the authors first language isn't English) makes for the story to be un-enjoyable and difficult to understand what's happening in the plot. Some advise I have for the author is to either set some limitations on the MC's ability or through the journey make him do challenges that he would have to complete from the ROB to unlock more of his potential powers. I also recommend using a writing tool like read and write gold or Grammarly to help with the fluidity and grammar for the writing.