Review Detail of Mikaza in One piece I'm the main character

Writing Quality: Use Grammarly to fix it Update Stability: one of the only reasons this isn't 1 star Story Development: Way to fast paced, Luffy wanting to become a marine? Character Design: Mc takes over luffy's body AFTER he meets shanks and decides to become marine admiral, his was of speaking is terrible and only has 1-2 good moments World Background: the other reason this isn't 1 star, it's one piece