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Nora Smith was pregnant when a rich claimer was presented to her family. She gave birth to her child and became thin and a beautiful lady and found that the claimer was still waiting for her.But this time she seemed to appreciate him. The narrative style is perfect. There are many lively scenes. The characters are well described and incarnate well their roles. Good job!

Lily will get married due to an arranged business marriage by her mother. The humorous style is perfect. The dialogue is vivid. It is lively. Good job! You are gifted in this genre.

Rean had no interest in life and decided to die. However he regretted when being died and wanted to be reincarnated. The struggle was hard with death. The description is rich and there are lively scenes. The style is good. *The story turns around death and there are some redundancies. * There is a lack of some different events. Keep on it!

The plot reveals a legendary story inspired from Asiatic culture. There are some personages that belong to another world and all is centered around a certain spiritual strength. The narrative style is good and there is a dialogue. There are many lively scenes. The story may get several events too. Keep on it!

The plot is a vision of the city especially the university in the future, 500 years later. Many animals mutations would occur but some freshmen would remain and the selection of the citizenship would be linked to the best academy rank. The narrative style is mostly telling. There are some passages of dialogues too. The expressions are meant and there are lively scenes. It is an original plot that needs further events. Good job!

The plot is about a big tour game that may cost cities destruction and lives. The narrative style is perfect and there is a big suspense. The reader wants to know more about the game. The description is rich and there are many lively scenes. It is written in a consistent language. It is an exciting adventure story.It is original too. Good job!

The script is a revelation and a description of a killer master. There is no real plot based on some events and actions. In the same manner there is no dialogue. Some expressions should be improved and changed into other meant ones. *There are many details but there is no a structured story. Keep on it.

The legendary story reveals the bloody path of a certain sect. The narrative style is correct. There are lively scenes. * The plot is focal some different events may let it interesting to read. Keep on it!

It is a legendary story inspired from Asia culture. The narrative style is perfect. I like the dialogue; it is vivid. There are lively scenes. The story fits children's literature too.

The story reveals a carrier fight if a spokeswoman. She got married to a boss to venge after loosing her job. The narrative style is perfect. There are many lively scenes. The characters incarnate well their roles. The story bears suspense. There is humour too. It is meant and there is a logic scheme of the chronological events. Good job!