an idea for yamato's full beast form. author-sama

Idolo tu historia tiene muchisimo potencial espero seguir leyendo. Un capricho de gusto personal no es necesario que escribas o describas todo el glosario que realizaste antes de publicar el capitulo de entrada seria mejor ir a la accion. En fin es solo una opinion es tu historia al fin y al cabo espero que no la dejes. Un abrazo

bro rereading your story and comparing it to the manga currently. It's scary and goosebumps how you hit things like the level 5 buster call the secret of alabasta among many things. You have true manga predictability. This is the best fan work I have read and will read about the world of One Piece without a doubt.

please continue teacher. I saved this story with the hope that at some point it would continue

bro really delete it. In many chapters you can see that the fic itself sucked your balls. You basically divided into 2 things, I'm too broken but meh and I'll do it later. no one expects a tolkien play here but at least some love for your own work. On the other hand, it is noticeable that you did not like this work at first since I was reading your story of the god of the forge and it is a 9/10 so far I will be totally aware of that work of yours

he died?

Very good story really. I must admit that at first I did not have faith in him since my brain could not concede what a semi-all-powerful beast like Madara would be like in the world of avatar, I thought that he would be one of those typical protagonists who make the story bland, boring or simple for be so powerful I must say that it took me a huge surprise, it even gave me a lot of smiles and good times in your current 46 episodes. With all my heart I hope for more chapters and I will pray to all the spirits so that you do not abandon this story. Peace brother keep it up.

Beautiful book that you created teacher. I congratulate you for your clear, concise and above all original writing. At a time when most prefer to mistranslate and publish Chinese farting fics, you have a very good job even if you translate it, which I doubt is an excellent translation since there are no errors in the character names of the classes or the currencies. In any case, I will be faithfully watching your work and I hope it has many chapters.

I like your story bro. To hell if it has nothing to do with the original, for a reason it's already a fan work at least it shows that you do everything possible to make sense of the mess that is the universe of fate. You continue writing to your total liking if we read the 30 chapter of your fic it is because we enjoy your work.

Bro it's a very good story actually. After reading hundreds of fanfics, finding something that attracts your attention and not being morbid or bullshit about torture, rape or other crap is quite encouraging. The only thing I can tell you is don't pay attention to your criticisms. You present your works however you want, even more so if it's complex shit like the Fate universe. In my country they do not prohibit its transmission but even so since I saw it for the first time I do not understand the issue of its magical system is ridiculously complicated and alpedo having only 3 existences really op within that world. Anyway, I just wanted to encourage you to continue writing, I'll keep an eye on your updates and make the story as you see fit. You're never going to please everyone and you're always going to receive both good and bad reviews.

Muy buena historia bro. Empezo de forma exelente pero en los ultimos 10 cap el prota desaparecio para volverse un copy page del guion de cap america. Seguro no me haces caso pero de igual manera lo pondre por favor pon mas interacciones del peotagonista. De memoroa sabemos que sucedio en cap america y para la gente que no lo sabe ni idea de que hace leyendo un fic de marvel

Very good story the truth, it just develops too slowly for my liking. How many approximate chapters do you plan to create? since I don't want you to end up abandoning it bro for giving it too much drama or many twists to the plot anyway I hope you don't abandon it and keep posting periodically.

very good story. I really hope you don't drop her and I wonder will there be romance in the future or will it be purely massacre? and how many chapters do you think you will have?

FINALLY A GOOD MARVEL FANFIC!!!!! thanks bro from now on you take all my current and future power stones. I haven't read something good from the marvel verse in a while where the protagonist is powerful and doesn't act like a scared and sick teenager please don't drop this story.

bro as long as you don't use things like 0800 year dog xianxia calendar or misspell character names like some translators do for my ok

Excellent History. You improved a lot compared to the previous ones. I hope there are many chapters and don't abandon it since it has excellent potential. To my taste, it lacks a lot of dialogue and there is a lot of unnecessary information, but it improves with each chapter. I will look forward to the updates

great chapter bro. I would like to recommend that you aim for more interaction or dialogues between characters or different points of view where there are conversations... that way you will get more comments, sometimes the information dumps are bad

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Yes

700 per chapter please bro