Review Detail of DaoZar in Fate/Poseidon

Bro it's a very good story actually. After reading hundreds of fanfics, finding something that attracts your attention and not being morbid or bullshit about torture, rape or other crap is quite encouraging. The only thing I can tell you is don't pay attention to your criticisms. You present your works however you want, even more so if it's complex shit like the Fate universe. In my country they do not prohibit its transmission but even so since I saw it for the first time I do not understand the issue of its magical system is ridiculously complicated and alpedo having only 3 existences really op within that world. Anyway, I just wanted to encourage you to continue writing, I'll keep an eye on your updates and make the story as you see fit. You're never going to please everyone and you're always going to receive both good and bad reviews.