Janis_Jeplin

Great job, I don't understand the criticism regarding the character of the mc, you have to keep in mind that in the beginning he was a naive and good hearted person, the most reasonable change is the gradual one, I think the author is developing the character with logic. Don't be impatient and enjoy the journey.

Otherwise, it's a satisfying novel, I like the thing about summoning beings from other planes, the novel would have been fine with this one premise, it may not be a very original theme, but I think how you're currently handling it is interesting.

I'm giving you a rating of 5 because I understand that you're a novice writer, but there really are a few small errors in logic that personally bother me a bit. At the outset of the novel, he refrains from distributing additional bread despite being a "benevolent individual by nature", or he neglects a young girl while he is "busy" with Roselia. I comprehend his desire to maintain a low profile, and I comprehend his inexperience in caring for children. However, from the reader's perspective, it appears that his actions are solely motivated by personal gain. Maybe I misunderstood and the mc really wasn't a very good person, just a normal person who just happens to have a charity system in his possession.

I really like the plot and the mc.

I just want to support the author, please don't give up.

I just want to support the author, I really like his work.

I like cold and rude Mc´s

I'm just here to motivate the author. keep up the good work. team op mc!!

I like this. It's not complicated at all, just disconnect your brain and enjoy it. :D

I hope to see more of this story. Please do not give up the novel, author-san, I wish you much success. :D