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TobbyBrahm

TobbyBrahm

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2021-08-25 JoinedNigeria
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Commented

    Read primordial ascendance

    The owner felt like his brain was heavy, it felt dull like pounded yam and mashed tofu. It was a freakish comparison, but it was apt for his situation. He felt as if his pituitary gland was put on the burning fire.
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    Ocean Master
    Fantasy · GREAT
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Replied to Shadow78910

    De nada

    Ch 25 Wrath
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    Primordial Ascendance
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Replied to _michael

    Yeah after the 4th chapter, the lengths increasef

    Ch 3 The Gregorian Continent
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    Primordial Ascendance
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Commented

    Very good start. I wonder what thks family did to ouR mc

    Ch 1 Clean Massacre
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    Falling for his Prisoner
    Urban · PerkyPompous_Pixie
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Commented

    Sadist much??😂

    In the dead of the night right at the heart of the town, stood a young man in his late twenties. He took a deep breath of the still air, feeling rejuvenated by the cries of humans begging for mercy. The cracks of whips from his soldiers excite him, especially when the sounds of terror echoed the silent night. But! The night had just begun.
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    Falling for his Prisoner
    Urban · PerkyPompous_Pixie
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Replied to Rin_Nurnia

    Much appreciated

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    Primordial Ascendance
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Replied to _Rockbison_

    Thank you and the confusion is slowly being clearer u….i Hope yo entertain you all as readers

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    Primordial Ascendance
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Posted

    The story is progressing wonderfully. it is easy to understand and digest. My only problem are the tenses and some spelling errors. Other than that, every thing is top notch. I also appreciate mature content, so yes great work

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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Commented

    That took a turn fast

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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Replied to Fatiah_Alli

    Noted! Improvements will be all round

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    Primordial Ascendance
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Replied to kinji_yun

    No harem

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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Replied to GMSJakers

    Thanks for the honest revie….new chapters would have better character maturity

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    Primordial Ascendance
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Posted

    The book is quite good. So far, the plot is progressing at quite the pace but one major problem is the spelling. Some words are not spelt properly making me skim through and tenses are not placed properly. Was for is, came for go. All in all, it should be a good book if those things are rectified.

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    Her One Smile
    Urban · _Rockbison_
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  • TobbyBrahm
    TobbyBrahm1yr
    Commented

    Will there be a point where they all meet?Kireina, Ervas,Veronica, Frank, Chaos, Noah, Drake against the overseers??

    Ch 1426 The Selfish
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    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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