Vexxed

good. people in these comments want a bounty hunter to be batman or something.

This part isn’t even the mistake. How are you so incompetent as an author/translator, I don’t understand.

Why not just say you won’t sell to foreign countries?

In reality a zombie apocalypse would have zero chance of being an apocalypse.

I think the scene would’ve been better if you had the butler appear when the protagonist said “no,” then have the butler slap him and prepare to lecture him, but then be stopped by the patriarch. It would reinforce the character of the butler’s strictness, as it doesn’t make sense that he just does nothing when faced with blatant disrespect of the hierarchy, and also reinforce the patriarch’s kindness to stop the butler and hear the protagonist out. But still a good scene nonetheless.

the entire premise is that he’s a mercenary. great way to ruin your audience 👍

he was referring to the word “curls” dunce.

I’m now at chapter 104 and it became worse, so I’ll rewrite the review.

you want him to be a little twink like you or sum?

This has to be the worst writing ever.