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Wiktoria_Karolak

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  • Wiktoria_Karolak
    Wiktoria_Karolak1d
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    i tried for the second time to read it, as it was in free access, and I just can't. The level of naivety and stupidity shown by the MC is astounding. Additionally, I suppose that the language level should improve with the amount of text uploaded, but it did not. There are plenty of mistakes & inconsistencies that make it somewhat difficult and annoying to read. I do not know why is this book so often given in free access :/

    The Beauty And The Wolf
    Fantasy · Lizabelle88
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  • Wiktoria_Karolak
    Wiktoria_Karolak4mth
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    the story itself and the world is very interesting, however the characters are not very developed and are extremely naive (the main heroine acts idiotically almost all the time. I thing that there is a solid base for a great story, but a lot of work needs to be put to improve it.

    The Beauty And The Wolf
    Fantasy · Lizabelle88
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  • Wiktoria_Karolak
    Wiktoria_Karolak6mth
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    "of the fact"

    His eyes flashed with equal hot emotions. "Are you telling me that you are not on the list was suspicious of the father he has managed to gather so much of information from the local authorities without any authority of his own?"
    The Princess's Dangerous Vampire Mate
    Fantasy · Inara_Me
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