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Lol! I find the protagonist's inner voice relatable! His actions, not so much. But the thought process still seem more realistic than the MC's.
This is their second meeting. They haven't even kissed yet... This development speed is just waayyyy too unnatural...
A fic that actually has the heroine reveal that at the beginning!?!?!?
What...?
??? Why would the underworld recognize a brat as the owner? They would fight over ownership disputes now that the major deterrent is dead...