The_Slumbering_One

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So far it's looking at lot more interesting than any other invincible fic out there, especially thanks to the inclusion of other superhero media like The Incredibles and Megamind. Looking forward to more chapters.

I advise ignoring the people who call it AI. A lot of people on this app tend to throw at around like they're experts on the subject, when they're not. No point trying to convince them either, most of them don't care about what anyone says. They're similar to the people who constantly complain about stupid stuff but never leave.

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The story is pretty good. The character is honestly the most realistic reincarnate I've seen. He may seem lazy, but if you spent the rest of your previous life like that, why would you suddenly drastically change just cause your somewhere else. Even if Marvel and Twilight is apart of his world, most people would probably mind their own business and hope for a 'cheat'. Most people probably wouldn't put much effort into doing anything special, especially when a fit human in Marvel and Twilight might as well be a twig, and if your not a mutant, getting powers is usually super bad/good luck or the character being uber smart, which this guy isn't. The structure and word count are good and the story seems to be progressing quite naturally and well. Just wonder what will happen to the MC, as I imagine he will eventually get some form of power up.

Characters and world seem properly developed, and the idea itself is definitely interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes.

Isn't his name Choso?

Gang, he's 4. I don't think him struggling to speak so formally with a 4 year old's vocal cords is really a nerf.

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