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I'd say my biggest gripe with the Harem troupe is that most of the time it's put in places it just doesn't fit. I get it if its like a medieval world or something similar, but for most modern or slightly futuristic settings it just doesn't make sense and takes away from the story due to them having to find some reason to make it believable and not feel weird. Plus when they end up meeting others the whole multiple girlfriends aren't even really addressed or everyone just accepts it for some reason. That's my opinion anyway.
Genjutsu ideas: Keikaku, enough said. And some form of Genjutsu that has layers to it, like dreams that when you wake up are actually still in a dream.
Yeah, lets not forget what Typhlosion did.
She's Emma Stone, but her real name is Emily Stone.
I'm quite disappointed with the way this story is turning out for many reasons. Reason one: He barely uses his divinity properly, so he ends up needlessly overspending on things that if he were more creative, it could cost significantly less. Reason 2: The level of progression of the character makes it seem like he's way ahead of the other gods due to the fact that an entire kingdom is praying to him every day. Is he? No, you get this random God who wasn't even brought up as one of the ones with the most potential being almost at the same level as the MC. which sets a precedent that the gods with potential should in reality curbstomp the MC. Reason 3, constant use of the plot device that is him needing 10x more divine energy to do things that aren't a part of his divinity even though apparently every other god only has divinities that aren't whole while he does. This should be the MC some benefits, right? Wrong, throughout almost 50 chapters, there has been not a single benefit that this brings him. Finally, reason 4, he is seemingly constantly being nerfed, whether it be through the character himself or via boosting the other gods to the point where you're sat there going,"How is this guy that strong? not even a couple chapters ago the MC going up 2 ranks was awe-inspiring to the teachers." Overall disappointed in how this is being handled, it had tons of potential but got ruined.
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In most of the chapters, there are moments that feel odd, or he repeats himself tons, so I recommend cutting back on it if you can as it's not very sustainable.
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