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EnlightenedPsych

EnlightenedPsych

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Too much freedom is poison

2021-08-13 JoinedGlobal
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych15h
    Commented

    Shouldn't it be B- ?

    2x B and 1x C = Talent B
    New life in the world Hunter x Hunter I am AMORI
    Anime & Comics · HolyDK
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych16h
    Commented

    Seems promising, don't give up author.

    Ch 3 Suspicion
    Reborn as a Zoldyck (HxH)
    Anime & Comics · Autonomy
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych16h
    Commented

    Did he place all his aure? Should have left a bit to train his control over it. Well even then he is immensly talented so it come easily anyway

    Ch 2 New Life
    Reborn as a Zoldyck (HxH)
    Anime & Comics · Autonomy
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych16h
    Commented

    Did you know about the naming sense of the Zoldyck familly, is to attribute the end of the name of a child as the beginning, for the direct younger sibling, for example: IlluMI > MIlluKI > KilluA > AlluKA > KAlluto and so on. So did you name Yopi ater his mother KikiYO to mark his existence as an outlier in the family or am I thinking too much,

    "This one will be Yopi," Silva finished, looking down at his children with a spark of paternal affection deep within his emotionless eyes.
    Reborn as a Zoldyck (HxH)
    Anime & Comics · Autonomy
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych17h
    Commented

    Time to be the true Harem King

    Lolikiano Mistrim, Amaterasu Omikami, Shin Yoohwa, Anya Anastasia, Sari, among many other women... after all, this world is not short of high-quality meat.
    The Gamer: A gigaChad Scientist
    Anime & Comics · Thinker_
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych1d
    Commented

    As expected of a former ninja, the slave mentality is still there

    One reason for joining the Marines was that as a former Earthling, he had a greater sense of identification with the military and had reservations about being a pirate. Although the Marines in the world of pirates had some corruption and flaws, overall they were still good, and they represented the official side.
    One Piece: As a Marine With Rinnegan
    Anime & Comics · primordial_idli
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych1d
    Commented
    The unrestrained shouts of the fierce pirates echoed in every corner of the Eternal Hell for a long time. The last comment was thrown by a very tall and muscular individual with a cleft chin and three-day stubble, large lips, thick black hair styled like a truffle, and light blue eyes with long lashes. Despite his classic prisoner's attire, he somehow managed to have a large pink heart in the center.
    Guarding Impel Down For A Hundred Years, I Am Invincible
    Anime & Comics · Guionista
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych2d
    Commented

    Good progress we can see the difference from the lasts chapters

    Ch 7 chapter7
    one piece: step of the great
    Anime & Comics · thestarfall
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych2d
    Commented

    What about Oden, during those ten years he was only briefly mentionned at the beginning, and having such a monster as a sibling mc should have made a few remarks about him

    Ch 6 chapter 6
    one piece: step of the great
    Anime & Comics · thestarfall
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych2d
    Replied to EnlightenedPsych

    You can also show us his thinking process, his emotions and wants, to make us more invested toward the mc

    Ch 4 chapter 4
    one piece: step of the great
    Anime & Comics · thestarfall
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych2d
    Commented

    Quite good, but the chapters are a bit short, I think you could expand more on the mc interractions with others, and the differents parties reactions to diverse situations, in the form of thougths from their POV.

    Ch 4 chapter 4
    one piece: step of the great
    Anime & Comics · thestarfall
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych2d
    Commented

    And in case you ever were to fail, you could always be whitewashed like orochimaru

    Hyuga is an enemy, so Konoha is an enemy, so Naruto is also an enemy. This is a very simple logic chain.
    Life of a Villain Starting from The Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · IHaveNoNamingSense
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych3d
    Replied to BurgerNight
    emmm...Maybe because of her age and experience, the elasticity and slipperiness are slightly inferior to Nami, but it is still very moist.
    One Piece: Ruthless
    Anime & Comics · Aries_tana
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych7d
    Commented

    What a scum!

    Lynne earnestly raised two fingers, "2000 skull coins per unit! But considering you're my kind and a regular customer, I can give you a 20% discount, selling it to you for 1600 coins per bottle, practically a bankruptcy price!"
    Creepy Pharmacist: All My Patients Are Horrific
    Book&Literature · Fish9527
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych8d
    Commented

    Or personality disorder

    Hokage: Kakashi, stay calm. You must not give in to emotions. You didn't beat your friend. It seems you were under a powerful genjutsu.
    Naruto: Serial Killer System
    Anime & Comics · SetKej
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych9d
    Commented
    She racked her brains to think of words of comfort, "Think about it, among us three little girls, who would dare to be interested?"
    One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock
    Anime & Comics · Uchicha_Remant
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych10d
    Commented
    What use is there in having a good sense of humor when I'm dead?
    Sussy Baka in MHA
    Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych11d
    Commented

    op fruit wasted on some fish simp

    Gabban and the others also offered to help Neptune with his troubles, in the end, he sighed, explaining that Vander Decken IX was hiding too well and possessed the Mato Mato no mi The Paramecia-type ability of a Devil Fruit which allows him to mark someone as his target by touching them with his bare hand so that any weapon he throws with that same hand will "lock on" to and chase after the target until it hits them, or until it is stopped by an obstacle.
    Buggy D Clown
    Anime & Comics · Marioni
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych12d
    Commented

    Bullet maybe?

    Buggy waved his hand dismissively and replied, "So, Ivan, lead the way. I'd like to visit the sixth floor and see if I encounter any familiar faces. Perhaps we can find unexpected support during the jailbreak. It would make breaking through the blockade easier."
    Buggy D Clown
    Anime & Comics · Marioni
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  • EnlightenedPsych
    EnlightenedPsych12d
    Replied to Vastoking

    But that's Yang affinity he got, so it is indeed rare for a yin main clansmen to have

    After doing the jutsu once , it was more of a memorization of the path and form of the chakra without the scrolls. I would have to guess it would take me like 3-4 months for me to memorize the path. I began thinking about what to do while in the academy, I thought maybe I could also practice changing chakra form. I went to the market and got one of the chakra attribute papers, it was expensive. I had to use the prize money from the clan I got to get first place in duels in the academy exam. After putting some chakra into the paper, half of it got burnt and the other half turned black with a white dot in the middle. I had no idea what the second transformation was, so I did the usual of asking a clan police officer. He told me it was a yang attribute. Something very very rarely seen in the ucihaha clan. And that the clan had no techniques to purchase for yang release, and my best shot was stealing some when I got my Sharingan. 
    Naruto : Chad Uchiha
    Anime & Comics · persianchad75
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