Asstolfo_

hate this. why add it?

missed a full stop.

should be and instead of or

retard its lorem ipsum, placeholder latin text

fair enough, I was just more interested to see him talking to his daughters than to read 15 chapters of him yapping to a disciple

should've made this more apparent earlier when he was first fighting the dragon. Putting this so late in the story feels like you're making up

he already has the black flames no? why would he need another fire skill unless he 'wants to keep it a secret'. If so, that would need to be explained. Also keeping 15 aces up your sleeve feels like cheap writing but that depends on how its written

retard

this is cringe and poor writing, you're just forcing character development, it feels rushed and unnatural