Beautiful content.Characters are very interesting.Ricol, a unique character and Jake and John are good characters. Very nice story. Agirl with super power. A loveable character.

Waiting for next part. Ricol, one of my favorite character. Bold and unique girl. Her character representation was so special. Add, more thrilling situations.

I really liked your story. The characters are all well and good. Especially the heroine of this. Good writing .................... 👌👌👌👌

Good

Wow.... Super. I like this story very much. But the story end suddenly............ And please improve your writing style..................................................