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I love how the actions of the phantom thief actually have an effect like this guy who turned to being a villain because he got fired because of the phantom thief. Plus I absolutely love how every small action that you do in chapters have special purposes. I loved both this chapter and the Fanfic
Firstly totally loved the quirk that Luca has it just fits his personality perfectly. Your portrayal of Luca is so Good as well. And I mean many has done like the genius type of person but to it never seems right. But yours is absurdly good because I can actually see that every action every event every provocation that Luca did he did it because of a plan or something. As well I feel like Luca is like hundreds of steps ahead another thing that adds to genius type. Overall its a fantastic story always looking forward for the next chapter author
The this is a truly fantastic fan fiction that I think is too underrated. Not only does it have a fantastic portrayal of different characters but those characters actually have a certain dept to them. Author truly out did himself with this fan fiction. This is a truly engaging fanfic that never leaves you feeling bored. Plus its different enough from the manga/anime that you never know if the author will twists somethings around. For me personally I balled my eyes out when reading about the fight of mulan and kali and the subsequently death of mulan this chapter had so much depth and emotions to it.
This an absolutely fantastic chapter. The entrance of Mulan's father made me cry so hard and I was filled with so much emotion about the whole thing. The portrayal of mulan by the author is astounding like I could actually see her doing something like this
The way you make the riddles for the card is very hard to figure put but at the end when the cards meaning is revealed I'm just like ahhh how could I not figure that out I feel like I'm watching kaito kid again Good job to author for the great chapter
Thank you for the chapter. The story is amazing I like how Icarus story and his abilities. His nothing special but with the use of his mind and inventions he was able to contest with demigods i like his cleverness too. All and all great job and good fanfiction