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melissa is starting to become a bit of a cliché, fix this character please

My friend, the story is very interesting and well-crafted, continue like this, AUTHOR.

I think you should remove options 2 and 3 from the story, my friend. MC should form a small team that hangs out in the dark and should do his job coldly and should be an anti-hero.

It's going very well, keep it up

The story is giving out holes everywhere, it's ridiculous, I hope it gets fixed in the future

The episode seemed very contrived to me. It could have been better. The author wrote it just for the sake of writing.

I don't know if it's because of the translation, but the conversations are very formal

The main character seemed very soft to me and does not give me a soldier vibe

Where is the new episode? ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................