certainly, I tried little twists and turns because, The OC character, I made was unwilling to let someone die because he wanted to change and save people he knew he could save, but that change is what scares him. because there might be consequences, his first act was waiting this period out, but his sister had just linked in the game and now he is stuck like the rest because he wants to make sure his sister is well and safe. I don't know how to make it good without following sort of what is next plot-driven. I also used the timeline and the anime, I don't know how to get a novel so I'm just writing as it goes. but... I think my best bet if I want a story-based and create my own, make it my own story, then I will play the SAO integral factor game to explore the SAO series world and ingame. but thank you Ciaphas. for the help...

coming in like a surprise... sorry... but anyway, after I thought of it logically and did some research, I needed to say I'm well confident then...maybe till summer and after... can't promise, writing block and the will to write is draining aswell I have work and my own life.

ehhh..more like when I find time to write

Thank Uwu!

Tekezuro

random... if you seen my library you can see I prioritize my others more... (I have 15 +1 wattpad account with current 1 book)

I doubt the lady, would accept it. the servant that has served her, had feelings for her? she just don't feel the same way and just wanted to end things with her charges,

I think its most logical it also follows the common sharing body trope.

her words were absolute. He couldn't want her to hate him in her last moment

I have work and is tired and just haven't really got content to work with.

wow thats...super helpful andsuper duper thankful.

This is actually really good and funny, the grammar thou...could be done with help of grammarly or Wordtune to help with sentence, or other sites like those.

you wish...just keep reading, you see why.

yeah it's weak, I had to add something and I just changed it to weak, many fire caster can use it as easy as butter. even children, it small but it has a evolution stage tier 4 and 7

yeahhhh...thanks for noticing my mistake. Also Orange and Red are switching place, I did an check and the closer red fire was closer to orange it hotter, but Red flames still could go as high as 1000*C

Have you seen the pile?! I have 13 books that I need to focus on? you my sir, or my lady are literally killing me if you want to see the next chapter. that fricking soon! JK (P.S don't take it seriously, not mad, just tired.)

thanks for the correct responding (it 6 years my bad for the Typo)

it's not dropped, as long I'm still alive, breathing, have time I will come back and write bit by bit.

And thanks to you too, for checking my book, peace sister or brother ☮🙏🙏🙏

I use the reference for Japan, in china the Azure dragon were blue