Sara_Borden

The mix-up of names is getting very irritating within this very good, well written apocalyptic storyline! Where are Webnovel's editors to help solve this problem.

I am very pleased to read a well written story that may have been translated into our very hard English ! Kudos to the author and/or editors who translated a wonderful story!

The author repeated several paragraphs in Chapter 1 and mixed up the word they for using it in regards for one person . Where are the editors to help the author?

Another wonderful, heart breaking chapter! I hope everything turns out okay for Diara, but the amazing way the author wrote the chapter makes me want to continue on and read to see what happens!

What a beautiful , wonderful, and terrifying first chapter! Kudos to the author ! This well written first chapter captured my attention and makes me want to con continue reading!

This good story needs a better translator and editor to help with wrong names and mixed up personal pronouns. It's getting difficult for this reader to mentally get the correct words to make the sentence or paragraph make sense.

This good story needs a better translator and then editor for mixed up names.

What happened ? The three siblings were about to get in an altercation at the river and all of sudden they were carrying water up the stairs? Otherwise, it is a good story !

What a fantastic gripping terror/thriller story! The story automatically grips you inside and you can't put the story down! Thanks to the wonderful story telling from this author! And thanks to Webnovel for publishing better written e-stories! I will definitely look for more stories written by this author to read!

A very well written and interesting story . This is slightly different from the other reincarnated storylines . The author slowly builds up the character and personality in each person. I certainly appreciate the differences in this story. It makes it very enjoyable and entertaining to continue to read on to find out what happens next