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This is a very good storyline. It would be even better if an editor had gotten a hold of it to help with grammatical errors. Sometimes those errors deviate from the story, until I can figure out what is being written.For example: the word " children" in it self is plural: therefore there is no reason to put an s at the end to make it plural ... "the childrens" This caught me off guard and I had to straighten out the sentences with the word "childrens" in it. This is still a very interesting story with a lot of " what's going to happen next" that it instills me to continue to read onward!
I am really enjoying this story. It has believable characters and it is not filled with horrific violence or terrible abuse. It includes nearly all the genres of a storyline. The story has drama, romance. comedy etc. My only problem with all the stories are that they have way too many chapters. I do believe that this is an editing problem of the whole ebook reading apts. Editors have you ever heard of condensing several chapters into one or starting a new book with the same characters-called a series!!! Thank you do much for this type of storyline. It is a fresh breathe for me from all the other storylines I have read in the WEBNOVEL app.