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MIR_Devalanci

MIR_Devalanci

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I am a fantasy novel lover.English isn't my first language.I hope to make friends all over the world

2021-08-02 JoinedGlobal
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci3d
    Posted

    everything was good except the mc.He was tge biggest letdown of the whole novel. And reason is author wasn't able to portray what he wanted to show. Like from the start of the novel he was hailed as a genius and intelligent guy but throughout the whole novel only thing we saw us how stupid he is. The author even dumbed down the whole world's iq and eq to make him look like a genius yet that wasn't able to hide the flaw of his character. You have to think out of the box to properly write a intelligent character which unfortunately the author wasn't able to.

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    White Online
    Games ¡ Alekzi
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci4d
    Commented

    yay

    'Hi everyone, Keanu here. Chapters are resuming Monday for our regular schedule of Monday-Wednesday-Friday.
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    MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
    Anime & Comics ¡ keanu_eugene
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci16d
    Commented

    the first chapter made me hooked.Your writing style is quite enjoyable i must say. No heavy wordings or not many mistakes. Keep it up

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 - Link Start
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    Shattered: A SAO Tale (Sword Art Online)
    Anime & Comics ¡ Reis123
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci18d
    Posted

    A hidden gem. First 10 chapters were quite rocky but after that the author got everything right on place. I started with 0 expectations and after reading early chapters it almost made me drop it. But after reading past 20 chapters it got me hooked in It. I like the author's way of writing. It just felt natural to me. A great read

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    Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both
    Fantasy ¡ Lonelythree
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci19d
    Replied to LuenorSureva14

    From the Country Team To the Rich

    Ch 21 Chapter 21 First Practice Game
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    The Legends of Hoffenheim FC
    Sports ¡ MIR_Devalanci
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci19d
    Replied to LuenorSureva14

    I am not sure..I didn't get the proper reaction and views i thought it will get. I am very busy personal life. If you want to you can read the mtl of this novel. The mtl is one of the best readable mtl i have seen of a chinese novel.

    Ch 21 Chapter 21 First Practice Game
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    The Legends of Hoffenheim FC
    Sports ¡ MIR_Devalanci
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci19d
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 443 The End of the Tournament and the Fantasia Parade
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    Fairy Tail: Metal and Threads
    Anime & Comics ¡ SixthSense1029
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci21d
    Posted

    too much using of hard word. Great writing but not my cup of tea. I'm not good with my vocabulary so sometime i don't even understand what i am reading and as a result i need to read it more then once. It's not author's fault but mine that i am lacking in that section. But still i think you could've gone more easy on the wording.

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    MY SUGAR MUMMY IS A BEAUTIFUL VAMPIRE
    Urban ¡ ElderGods
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Commented

    I'm becoming a fan of Morgan👊

    It was a way for blessed to say 'I am so powerful I can clear this dungeon in record time and still look damn good!!'
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    Blessed by Night
    Fantasy ¡ AnathaShesha
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Posted

    I tried to give it a shot after seeing so many views but was so disappointed. This isn't a story for me and those sane readers who likes to read quality story. If you are a fan of trashy chinese style writing and story where the mc does something and everyone goes 'wow' then you may give it a try. For me this was just a waste of hours which i will never get back. And After this review i won't even care what happens to the story. Sayonara🤞

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    I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
    Fantasy ¡ RagingArtPunk
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Commented

    The writing style has a huge chinese story like flow. It seems like chinese novel had a huge impact on the story. Not that it's bad but it could have been more better. Let's see what happens in the next Chapters.

    Ch 6 Ultimate Berserk Howl Vs The Horned Panther
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    I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
    Fantasy ¡ RagingArtPunk
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Replied to Daoist_Kaito

    the original type of yandere. Now days yanderes are heavily modified. In the past yandere were mostly associated with a person who could even harm their loved ones.Even resorting to kill their loved ones

    "He will not leave my side if he can't even walk, right?" A smile formed on Olivia's face, revealing her clear intentions—she was determined to have Ryuk at all costs, even if it meant causing him harm.
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    Reincarnated and Regressed Villain - Make heroines beg for forgiveness
    Fantasy ¡ A4KL
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Commented

    My bro is doing sui*ide like he is going for a walk

    Ch 41 Chapter 41: The Descent and Escape
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    The Bizarre Love Game Where Everyone's a Yandere
    Fantasy ¡ BlazeMaddox
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Replied to BlazeMaddox

    you mean witness the sufferings of mc together?

    Ch 18 Chapter 18: A Gruesome Discovery
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    The Bizarre Love Game Where Everyone's a Yandere
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Replied to Rillik

    well if author writes those relationships well this could become a nice story.

    "Midorima, can't you see the light blue-haired student over there?" Tsunayoshi addressed Midorima, gesturing discreetly toward Kuroko.
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    Court of Rebirth: The Conqueror (KnB)
    Anime & Comics ¡ mythoast
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Replied to keanu_eugene

    so there will be another volume called Horizon:Super Villain?🧐

    Ch 307 UPDATE!
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    MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Commented

    Maaaaan. That is long....

    Regular uploads will resume as soon as I've got that sorted out, hopefully 2-6 weeks.
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    MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Commented

    the wait was worth it. You did such a fantastic job with it.

    Sorry about the delays but...I hate tournament arcs, and I needed to take my time with the Horizon VS Deku chapters since you've all waited 300 chapters for it.
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    MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
    Anime & Comics ¡ keanu_eugene
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Commented

    Is there any picture of his logo

    Yet there are pillars raised in it where the lightning seemingly didn't hit, forming Horizon's logo, the smiling face with checkered teeth.
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    MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
    Anime & Comics ¡ keanu_eugene
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  • MIR_Devalanci
    MIR_Devalanci1mth
    Commented

    bro became a mini thor.

    And when the light fades, they look up at Horizon, to see him standing in the air, holding a crystalized lighting bolt, brimming with power.
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    MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)
    Anime & Comics ¡ keanu_eugene
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