MIR_Devalanci
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MIR_Devalanci4dPostedOne of the worst start to a novel i've ever seen It's just a wish fulfillment novel with bad writing. The first 15 chapters are just basically the mc praising himself of how good,sexy,hot,smart,rich,bored,strong he is. I've read many novel where mc act all high and mighty and i enjoyed those Because of the way they are portrayed.But this is just author inserting himself and feeling cool and aloof. And he also got same minded people who enjoys Imagine themselves as the best in the world. There is no plot.No development. If you want to read something good please avoid it. But if you want to just pass your time maybe give it a try.
- MIR_Devalanci4dCommentedCh 16 Kayden Answers Five Of The Unanswered Questions
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Summary of first 10 chapter. "Look at me, I'm handsome.I'm rich,I am hot. I am powerful,I was loved and revered by the whole world.I am talented.Please look at me. I'm 14 and I'm deep. Praise me. love me.Obsess over me.I can do anything.I'm bored.Everything is my plaything.I'm better then everybody.." So is it going to happen throughout the whole story?
Ch 10 Zombie Survival Online's First Round Is About To Start! - MIR_Devalanci4dReplied to Sphire1707
Yeah let's break all kind of football record with this one🔥🔥
'Maybe I should not even resign a contract with them and just leave on a free transfer,' An even pettier thought popped up in his head as he got back to his meal. - MIR_Devalanci5dReplied to Filler1_Name2
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"Well done. If Number One Player Company grows bigger and stronger in the future, each of you will have played an indispensable role! Mr. Ke will definitely want to commend you when he finds out!"detailI Just Want Players to Save Money, They Insist on Giving Me!Urban · Chen Tang Resting on the Moon - MIR_Devalanci5dCommented
i'm dropping it. This thing has been going on for too long. The joke has lost It's meaning. It's just frustrating now.
"Besides, have you ever seen a normal company where every big and small matter needs to be reported to the chairman? Aren't problems usually resolved with the managers leading the employees?"detailI Just Want Players to Save Money, They Insist on Giving Me!Urban · Chen Tang Resting on the Moon - MIR_Devalanci5dCommented
bruh. A cashcow went in to the hand of someone who doesn't want to earn money🤣
[Congratulations on triggering a super critical hit on the blind box! You have obtained a MOBA game plan: League of Legends...]detailI Just Want Players to Save Money, They Insist on Giving Me!Urban · Chen Tang Resting on the Moon - MIR_Devalanci5dCommented
That's Crazy (2)
More like what? Like a man wearing a disheveled suit and a torn tie, standing on the rooftop holding half a bottle of erguotou in his left hand, while in his right the phone displays a slew of dense numbers and charts, and just as a green line plummets to the bottom, a text pops up saying 'Honey, the boss wants me to join him for drinks tonight, so I won't be coming home. Don't overthink it, we're all colleagues, although I'm the only woman, they're all old men, so I won't %￥%￥#8...%# sorry, my finger slipped, can't talk now, that's it.'detailI Just Want Players to Save Money, They Insist on Giving Me!Urban · Chen Tang Resting on the Moon - MIR_Devalanci5dCommented
please stop it. For us who don't understand germans and other languages this just takes the attention away from the story.
"Ich weiß nicht, was du mit einem vorsichtigen Spielstil meinst... aber ich werde immer mein Bestes geben, um dem Team zu helfen, indem ich meine Talente so einsetze, dass es dem Team zugute kommt. Bisher hat der Trainer nicht gesagt, dass er ein Problem mit meiner Spielweise hat, also glaube ich auch nicht, dass die Mannschaft ein Problem damit hat." As if completely ignorant of the strange stares he was receiving, Jason continued speaking in German. - MIR_Devalanci5dCommented
Bro...That will be like a transfer of the century for any club that will get him for free.
'Maybe I should not even resign a contract with them and just leave on a free transfer,' An even pettier thought popped up in his head as he got back to his meal. - MIR_Devalanci5dCommented
That is what i was thinking🤣. The only european team that can bring him at this moment is PSG or Psg.City wouldn't try because they always have a balanced transfer plan.
What was he supposed to do with such a stupidly high price that could only be paid for by those Oil country teams, or maybe China or America? - MIR_Devalanci6dReplied to Syndrome_O
horizon on his vacations
"It's a bit more complicated than that, but yeah, sure..." - MIR_Devalanci6dCommented
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Both the alligators seem annoyed that he left before swimming away from both Pro Heroes. - MIR_Devalanci6dCommented
Yeap he will mutate animals. And then he will rule the world with his pets.
Horizon looks down to see two large alligators sleeping at his feet, and sighs. "Ignore it," he says while stepping over them, only for them both to rush over to his new spot and resume their nap at his feet. - MIR_Devalanci9dReplied to Samot_Sempai
I think it was always foreshadowed by his naming his quirk The hand of GOD
"Alert me of all results in real-time," Horizon says as he warps away... - MIR_Devalanci13dPosted
It had One of the best potential to become one of the best story in WN. Yet author butchered this because of his over detailed writing. Sometimes he doesn't finish a arc where it should've been finished,and writes some pov or story that no body cares about. Sometimes it just feels like he is milking this story.Sometimes it just feels so frustrating to read that i even get the itch to just fucking punch the author through my device. If he didn't do those thing this story could've been so close to reaching the level of shadow slave.Even if it didn't reach that level it still could've been more popular then it is now.
- MIR_Devalanci13dReplied to Okojus
calm down "I'm 14 and this is deep" guy.
He instantly got shivers when he remembered that event, but [Dead Calm] suppressed everything in an instant. - MIR_Devalanci16dCommented" The Boss, I'm definitely going to make you one of my men in this life….. you're too valuable to pass on" Cervantez said as he strengthened his resolve to find and recruit The Boss into his guild in the future.
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Yes.Die boy. Kill yourself, end this story.
' It's my fault, it's all my fault, if I wasn't always talking about the arc ship at home, maybe…. Maybe mother would not have taken such a drastic step. I'm a horrible son, I'm lower than the lowest scum ' Leo thought as his body began shivering involuntarily.