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Nothing of which you said correlates to his cheat... Whether or not his superiority complex is because of the cheat or not, he still has it. It just sounds like you don't like systems, or his personality... But you do you ig.
Uh... How does that correlate to him cheating? Anyone can have a superiority complex even without a cheat...
kuzan
u don't have to explain yourself... It's your character, make him how you want as you gradually improve as you write by reading the comments of people and reading other fanfics... Something like what this person had said is something that grows along with your writing. Good story, I like it.
Don't use Stitch for your complaints! The sacred animal must be used in serious situations only!
how is that correct pronunciation if all three were used in myths? Wouldn't all three still be correct?
i think the guy whos posting it is just translating
madara dont even have a mangekyou ability that was shown though
Aint getting any boost in a new world a cheat..?
Yo, uh. Welcome to my story I guess, lol. Anyways, Tessia is love interest, might change because feelings change. If you don't like darkness manipulation, I don't really care cause although that's what I gave him, that's not what it will stay as. If you like wars and long-lasting ones, I mean LOOOOONG, lasting wars then HI! Read this. Update stability hasn't been great since I got grounded last month and it just ended, so that's why there's barely any chapters, but I'm trying Anyway, see you. I hope you read and enjoy. :)
its cause i wanted it to be. fetishes have nothing to do with it either.
rewrite because the way the story was going felt like it had no basis... Might've been the wrong way to spell that but its whatever. Anyway! Go with what you think is the best choice. A author doesn't always need opinions for his/her story. So it's best to do what you would be happy with. Good Luck on your story, whether you rewrite or not. Glad you're back!
no, i think they just chose new ones when they discovered it... I think the lances have been around awhile but died out once the wars stopped nd everything was "peaceful" between the 3 kingdoms.
everyone starts out somewhere
well u try living in a lab all ur life with minimal human interaction. Then get reincarnated nd try to realize the feelings people have for u. It's more difficult then u think