HabitualChaos
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I can't imagine an "ordinary" level 98 Duoluo.
Canon
John seems Tony boss right now
I feel that, like robots speaking. In the last conversation in this chapter, Tony Stark never could speak like a real estate seller, maybe if was his own house, but he could speak with jokes. If you want him to help the MC, you can include Tony asking for Jarvis to find a house based in the MC cementers. Perhaps you should search about the characters' voices, for writing a voice more similar to each character. Please, consider a positive comment. I wish the best and keep going!
She would use Assembly (-:
Maybe food and monitoring.
I had read "edgy" ashashash
Be careful with the pronouns, as Spencer is a man you need to use "his" and "he". Your work is so good, thanks for the chapter! :-)
Who is Lana Rhodes? It's an OC?
Can I clean here?
Maybe is better separete skills in active e passive, as: Passive Skills: Magical Perception Active skills: Aetherform transformation Superior Logical Process
Yes and Hiruzen is not picking a bunch of spies for his anbu. This is a kid move.
Well, let me introduce you to what we call analogy
Yep
Is right, I mean, Robin don't have this moment near of Blackbeard, but if is the time that Ace and Luffy had meet in Alabasta does right.
past life father?
You know that exist camera in the streets, stores, etc., right?
Prince or Princess?
security cameras in the streets
I mean… America is a continent too.