HabitualChaos

I can't imagine an "ordinary" level 98 Duoluo.

Canon

John seems Tony boss right now

I feel that, like robots speaking. In the last conversation in this chapter, Tony Stark never could speak like a real estate seller, maybe if was his own house, but he could speak with jokes. If you want him to help the MC, you can include Tony asking for Jarvis to find a house based in the MC cementers. Perhaps you should search about the characters' voices, for writing a voice more similar to each character. Please, consider a positive comment. I wish the best and keep going!

She would use Assembly (-:

Maybe food and monitoring.

I had read "edgy" ashashash

Be careful with the pronouns, as Spencer is a man you need to use "his" and "he". Your work is so good, thanks for the chapter! :-)

Who is Lana Rhodes? It's an OC?

Can I clean here?