Jed_Medalla

chapter is too short for the coin price

plenty of explaining to go. why don't you write more word for this chapter than more explanation to go. just go directly on English word

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can you make the chapter a lettle longer.

too short fir a chapter, why dont you make 3 chapter as one..[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

aw what a suspense you really know how to trigger the curiosity of your reader

I like the story very well, Its not dragged for too long so not make it too boring to read. its just that the intemate thing for the couple flirting was cut off. ohh Im just expecting it anyway[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

my god my hurt from laughter. this is so helarious.

ugh.....update is too slow

wow good stoey. but im sad that her second brother has a desire for her