LarcsytSalu

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when I come across typos or wrong word choice/phrase, I mention it using: "*corrected*" instead of "reg"; *corrected; reg ⏭ corrected My way of assisting non-native English authors sound more fluid

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LarcsytSalu6h ago
Replied to zarawang
you're welcome. I haven't read much so far, but it's already got me doing the "just one more paragraph before bookmarking spot so I can take care of a few household tasks–only to still be reading 5 mins later"
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I Was Marked By The System's Arbiter
LGBT+ · zarawang
LarcsytSalu7h ago
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"…of the two huddled, ventured. …"
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I Was Marked By The System's Arbiter
LGBT+ · zarawang
LarcsytSalu2d ago
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strained » stained
The next time he opened his eyes, Li Jun loomed over him, his clothes strained with blood. He was looking at him like he was staring at a worthless thing he could dispose of at will. He clenched his jaw tightly, the anger that had been festering beneath the surface at the verge of bursting like a dam wall.
The Mad King's Heir
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
LarcsytSalu2d ago
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Xu Yuan » Yu Xuan
"Your highness, how will I contact you?" she said while being dragged away by Xu Yuan. Li Jun ignored her as he took a swig of his drink, gulping it all down. To the three men in front of him, Li Jun was a scumbag who had just used this woman only to dump her without taking any responsibility. It was disgusting and shameful.
The Mad King's Heir
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
LarcsytSalu2d ago
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Xu Yuan » Yu Xuan
Xu Yuan said, "Yes, your Highness," as he walked over to help the young woman up. Having not had her fill, she was so reluctant to leave. She hadn't even kissed him yet, but they were asking her to leave. What she didn't know was that she wouldn't have gotten that chance even if the night club wasn't raided.
The Mad King's Heir
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
LarcsytSalu2d ago
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Ah-Yuan » Ah-Xuan
Li Jun pinched her chin and turned her head to face him. When she saw that enchanting face, like that of a fox demon, she found herself in a trance. Li Jun said, "Ah-Yuan."
The Mad King's Heir
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
LarcsytSalu2d ago
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"…like she was under a…"
Yu Wen met his gaze before glancing at the woman, his meaning obvious. Li Jun turned his gaze at the girl who had calmed down considerably. She was staring at Yu Wen like she under a spell. He clicked his tongue, not at all surprised that she was bewitched by those phoenix eyes.
The Mad King's Heir
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
LarcsytSalu2d ago
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dress » dressed
Yu Wen stepped out of the car dress in all black. He didn't need to be here as this wasn't his department, but because of who was being arrested, his friend, heading the operation, invited him along, knowing Li Jun's history with him.
The Mad King's Heir
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
LarcsytSalu4d ago
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"…but the was…" » "…but there was…"
His expression was as usual but the was a glint in his eyes like he was in a good mood. He replied, "No but you might get what you want sooner than you think."
The Mad King's Heir
LGBT+ · Andru_9788
LarcsytSalu4d ago
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"…it was Yu Wen who had…" » "…it was Li Yu who had…"
Yu Wen, on the other hand, had wanted to leave earlier but he hadn't seen Li Yu in a long time. The last time they spoke, he had promised her that they could chat a little longer. After all, it was Yu Wen who had saved him in the past. It would be too ungrateful to be so cold to her. Li Yu said, "So, is there anyone you do like?"
The Mad King's Heir
LGBT+ · Andru_9788