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Suggestion: this novel has an interesting story. a nerd who is selfish and experienced in thinking. in an urgent situation he can see the advantages and disadvantages. example in the outer disciple competition (In other novels maybe the protagonist would hide everything and pretend to be smart because of tricking the cultivation level with the reason of ALMIGHTY SYSTEM And Ada would seek thrill by slapping the opponent's butt.) But the novel had a flaw in terms of background. example (if han cai is relaxed why not make pills or formations, don't rely too much on the system. if you have free time add more experience with pills, formations or talismans.) And what I like is the time skip, if the time skip would you please explain in more detail about the things that went through for example refining the longevity pill for his father or his mortal family? it's much nicer to look at than to look at the sights all the time or at least once make another hobby (silver flute) calms down in terms of cultivation. and heavy on his explorations (spirit mine) and occasional comedic themes to keep things less tense. DON'T LISTEN TO THE RATS STILL ON YOUR OWN HEART. IF THERE ARE ANY INTERESTING SUGGESTIONS THEN THINK ABOUT IT.
Advice "At least be selfish for your own sake, if it's advantageous for the sake of strength then do "beneficial" things like fawning over the young master/princess. if it's just an ordinary person do you want to be "robinhood" come on be selfish for yourself. good but if you do it many times it might look "disgusting".
Boa Hancock. Nami. Robin!!!!!
this is a pretty good novel. not exactly the same as (Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate for a Thousand Years) but in my opinion it's lacking, if Han Jue has a lot of trump cards but if this is a little, all the skills are given to his students, not kept for himself for turf cards, Even though his talent doesn't make sense and his cultivation technique is good, it's better if you get a skill that's very OP for yourself / survival for the trump card, don't always give it to students. Your own survival is better, yes, you can just give one or two, not all of them later, if your student rebels, how come you don't have a card to save your life, you're dead. (Suggestions. The human heart is always changing bro, don't be so naive, even if it's a student, time will change, the human heart always changes, if one day your student betrays you, you die haha, that's all the advice) for this novel 4/5 for those who want to read :p damn the tortoise is the same as han jue's disciple.
NUMBER 4, ( A manipulative prince who will seize his father's wife and seize the territory of another kingdom / travel the world seizing other people's wives mwehehe :p ) -Number 2 is also good if you want to be a Hollywood boss, you can play with the artist mwhahaha -See you again-😬
yes it's nothing than not at all. :))